From owner-svn-src-stable@freebsd.org Thu May 18 17:03:08 2017 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-src-stable@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id B1B8AD730F5; Thu, 18 May 2017 17:03:08 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gjb@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [96.47.72.132]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client CN "freefall.freebsd.org", Issuer "Let's Encrypt Authority X3" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 8B2B010A; Thu, 18 May 2017 17:03:08 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gjb@FreeBSD.org) Received: from FreeBSD.org (freefall.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:6074::16:84]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by freefall.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 5783E5A13; Thu, 18 May 2017 17:03:07 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gjb@FreeBSD.org) Date: Thu, 18 May 2017 17:03:05 +0000 From: Glen Barber To: Adam Weinberger Cc: src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-stable@freebsd.org, svn-src-stable-11@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r318468 - in stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1: hardware readme Message-ID: <20170518170305.GC49693@FreeBSD.org> References: <201705181624.v4IGOBPb013236@repo.freebsd.org> <83CC5C29-230F-4033-B2A6-90E81D403A79@adamw.org> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha256; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="vOmOzSkFvhd7u8Ms" Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <83CC5C29-230F-4033-B2A6-90E81D403A79@adamw.org> X-Operating-System: FreeBSD 11.0-STABLE amd64 X-SCUD-Definition: Sudden Completely Unexpected Dataloss X-SULE-Definition: Sudden Unexpected Learning Event X-PEKBAC-Definition: Problem Exists, Keyboard Between Admin/Computer X-Spidey-Sense: Uh oh, Peter logged in User-Agent: Mutt/1.8.2 (2017-04-18) X-BeenThere: svn-src-stable@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.23 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for all the -stable branches of the src tree List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 18 May 2017 17:03:08 -0000 --vOmOzSkFvhd7u8Ms Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Thu, May 18, 2017 at 10:43:28AM -0600, Adam Weinberger wrote: > > On 18 May, 2017, at 10:24, Glen Barber wrote: > >=20 > > Author: gjb > > Date: Thu May 18 16:24:11 2017 > > New Revision: 318468 > > URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/318468 > >=20 > > Log: > > Fix grammar nits. > >=20 > > Sponsored by: The FreeBSD Foundation > >=20 > > Modified: > > stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml > > stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml > >=20 > > Modified: stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml > > =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D > > --- stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml Thu May = 18 16:24:10 2017 (r318467) > > +++ stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml Thu May = 18 16:24:11 2017 (r318468) > > @@ -555,7 +555,7 @@ > > > >=20 > > The following Sun &ultrasparc; systems are not tested but > > - believed to be also supported by &os;: > > + believed to also be supported by &os;: >=20 > As long as we're picking grammar nits, you've split an infinitive there. = I think you want "believed also to be supported" or "believed to be support= ed by &os; as well:". >=20 I like the wording from your second suggestion better anyway. Thanks. Glen --vOmOzSkFvhd7u8Ms Content-Type: application/pgp-signature; name="signature.asc" -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- iQIzBAEBCAAdFiEEjRJAPC5sqwhs9k2jAxRYpUeP4pMFAlkd08QACgkQAxRYpUeP 4pO1kQ/9GRlSHIL0Jn0RAr7AMCFyhEqII9rfTfTErW1ltDrVGLcVWiF83eiCT5SE zrGq6kyWL6abKQKIhFJ0+i27s6IwXBgZ7I3dVB1djrhdLEr5Tlhh3mHxT8BbvApQ 9aZWufOzISL+dLnwZl3MW0raOC0mSXhm8FLECWNZgBxh1CxjYu0A0PsL7nrXgE9b PNY927CvbdcASgmZEqxb6Nk7CDCMlTwTNDuzyDKwMB4pvxBgNtmHY8qPT6VeVAid vqmpsW9iP1meKcDC4wI4meWBnfOK6DwKNY3mrIeoTbQXCWc59V5j55Zsd/OX2TYn D3F/7oxOQ0LTWhfHSht1kAb3voqp+nrw6yGJHJK/okCOEae6Odlv6tF/VqmtPUMU G8LOetd7QZXHn4GzaEna+eFutw86jn9/dlnJSqhrpjLRRCOQ9A8j3YwpoIBrqVcq b21RkEtAzJ0u82Z0G2VohV6gFIV4cwPk2MaqafbHX2hXXtzf6j1+T0uiXc+aVJlC zJsD8KhcQ1uplD1bmo956bVG/NjQijC+7+ZSPLuNJ/remRRa7LPRwzNrPQmY4VEJ ZoCQ+DQEOw2bvpB7CbX6rq6GtcHhVXU/7SU2VtL/t6gEFC0PVUprI2Pko5r/o90r IC29pDT/CdYdoc8ApTjJmawIlfbeMw3dIpUVAu6AU6bhZfYkSp0= =j28E -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --vOmOzSkFvhd7u8Ms--