From owner-svn-doc-head@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Jan 29 22:37:45 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A18DEFA1; Tue, 29 Jan 2013 22:37:45 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from wblock@FreeBSD.org) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7DE11CCC; Tue, 29 Jan 2013 22:37:45 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.5/8.14.5) with ESMTP id r0TMbj3f079647; Tue, 29 Jan 2013 22:37:45 GMT (envelope-from wblock@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from wblock@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.5/8.14.5/Submit) id r0TMbjvt079646; Tue, 29 Jan 2013 22:37:45 GMT (envelope-from wblock@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201301292237.r0TMbjvt079646@svn.freebsd.org> From: Warren Block Date: Tue, 29 Jan 2013 22:37:45 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r40806 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for the doc tree for head List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 29 Jan 2013 22:37:45 -0000 Author: wblock Date: Tue Jan 29 22:37:44 2013 New Revision: 40806 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/40806 Log: Fix some minor grammar and punctuation problems. freebsd-update: change one mention to a man entity. freebsd-update: Set SRCCONF to null in both custom kernel sections. doc: add link to FDP in "building doc from source" section. doc: use in svn URL Move indexterm in signal 11 FAQ to answer fix rendering. Some changes suggested by Mehmet Erol Sanliturk . Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml Tue Jan 29 20:12:33 2013 (r40805) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml Tue Jan 29 22:37:44 2013 (r40806) @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ Jim Mock Restructured, reorganized, and parts updated - by + by @@ -168,7 +168,7 @@ If a crontab utilizing the features - of freebsd-update exists, it must be + of &man.freebsd-update.8; exists, it must be disabled before the following operation is started. @@ -432,7 +432,7 @@ MergeChanges /etc/ /var/named/etc/ &prompt.root; cd /usr/src -&prompt.root; env DESTDIR=/boot/GENERIC make kernel __MAKE_CONF=/dev/null +&prompt.root; env DESTDIR=/boot/GENERIC make kernel __MAKE_CONF=/dev/null SRCCONF=/dev/null &prompt.root; mv /boot/GENERIC/boot/kernel/* /boot/GENERIC &prompt.root; rm -rf /boot/GENERIC/boot @@ -481,7 +481,7 @@ MergeChanges /etc/ /var/named/etc/ &prompt.root; cd /usr/src -&prompt.root; make kernel __MAKE_CONF=/dev/null +&prompt.root; make kernel __MAKE_CONF=/dev/null SRCCONF=/dev/null For this kernel to be identified as the GENERIC kernel by @@ -912,7 +912,7 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done. western US mirror using the HTTPS protocol with this command: - &prompt.root; svn checkout https://svn0.us-west.FreeBSD.org/doc/head /usr/doc + &prompt.root; svn checkout https://svn0.us-west.FreeBSD.org/doc/head /usr/doc Please use the closest mirror from the available Subversion mirror sites. @@ -1021,6 +1021,11 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done. &prompt.root; cd /usr/doc &prompt.root; make FORMATS='html html-split' install clean + + For information on editing and submitting corrections to + the documentation, please see the FreeBSD Documentation + Project Primer for New Contributors. @@ -2924,13 +2929,13 @@ Script done, … - signal 11 - My compile failed with lots of signal 11 (or other signal number) errors. What has happened? + signal 11 + This is normally indicative of hardware problems. (Re)making the world is an effective way to stress test your hardware, and will frequently throw up memory @@ -2969,7 +2974,7 @@ Script done, … However, if you know what you are doing you can have make buildworld skip this step. This will make subsequent builds run much faster, since most - of sources will not need to be recompiled. The flip + of the sources will not need to be recompiled. The flip side of this is that subtle dependency problems can creep in, causing your build to fail in odd ways. This frequently generates noise on the &os; mailing lists,