From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Wed Apr 16 18:27:12 2014 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [8.8.178.115]) (using TLSv1 with cipher ADH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 004FF1C2; Wed, 16 Apr 2014 18:27:11 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id D63B2112C; Wed, 16 Apr 2014 18:27:11 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.8/8.14.8) with ESMTP id s3GIRBbO059705; Wed, 16 Apr 2014 18:27:11 GMT (envelope-from dru@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from dru@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.8/8.14.8/Submit) id s3GIRBYm059704; Wed, 16 Apr 2014 18:27:11 GMT (envelope-from dru@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201404161827.s3GIRBYm059704@svn.freebsd.org> From: Dru Lavigne Date: Wed, 16 Apr 2014 18:27:11 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r44584 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.17 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 16 Apr 2014 18:27:12 -0000 Author: dru Date: Wed Apr 16 18:27:11 2014 New Revision: 44584 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44584 Log: Fix a few typos and redundancy. Sponsored by: iXsystems Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml Wed Apr 16 18:10:02 2014 (r44583) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml Wed Apr 16 18:27:11 2014 (r44584) @@ -303,8 +303,8 @@ server-program-arguments indicates whether or not the service is able to handle its own socket. - socket types must use the - option while + socket types must use + while daemons, which are usually multi-threaded, should use . usually hands off multiple sockets @@ -746,8 +746,8 @@ mountd_flags="-r" The client now has everything it needs to mount a remote file system. In these examples, the server's name is server and the client's name is - client. To mount the - /home file system on + client. To mount + /home on server to the /mnt mount point on client: @@ -1898,7 +1898,7 @@ INTERNS (,able,test-domain) (,baker, netgroups Netgroup names longer than 8 characters should not be The names are case sensitive and using capital letters - letters for netgroup names is an easy way to distinguish + for netgroup names is an easy way to distinguish between user, machine and netgroup names. Some non-&os; NIS clients cannot @@ -1977,7 +1977,7 @@ ellington&prompt.user; ypcat +@IT_EMP:::::::::. Otherwise, all user accounts imported from NIS will have /sbin/nologin as their login - shell and noone will be able to login to the system. + shell and no one will be able to login to the system. To configure the less important servers, replace the old +::::::::: on the servers with these @@ -2348,7 +2348,7 @@ allow bind_v2 . Before saving this file, place the in front of the password output from slappasswd and delete the old - option above. The end result should + . The end result should look similar to this: TLSCipherSuite HIGH:MEDIUM:+SSLv3 @@ -4635,7 +4635,7 @@ AddModule mod_php5.c MySQL, or SQLite databases, with the default being SQLite. To change - the datbase engine, type make config + the database engine, type make config within /usr/ports/www/py-django, then install the port. @@ -4677,7 +4677,7 @@ AddModule mod_php5.c source web framework that provides a full development stack. It is optimized to make web developers more productive and capable of writing powerful applications quickly. On &os;, - tt can be installed using the + it can be installed using the www/rubygem-rails package or port. Refer to /usr/local/etc/smb.conf and customized before Samba can be used. - The smb.conf file contains runtime - configuration information for - Samba, such as definitions of the + Runtime configuration information for + Samba is found in + smb.conf, such as definitions of the printers and file system shares that will be shared with &windows; clients. The Samba package includes a web based tool called swat which provides a - simple way of configuring the smb.conf - file. + simple way for configuring + smb.conf. Using the Samba Web Administration Tool (SWAT) @@ -4960,8 +4960,8 @@ AddModule mod_php5.c server string - The string that will be displayed with the - net view command and some other + The string that will be displayed in the output of + net view and some other networking tools that seek to display descriptive text about the server. @@ -5019,8 +5019,8 @@ AddModule mod_php5.c Assuming that the default smbpasswd - backend is used, the - /usr/local/etc/samba/smbpasswd file + backend is used, + /usr/local/etc/samba/smbpasswd must be created to allow Samba to authenticate clients. To provide &unix; user accounts access from &windows; clients, use the following command to @@ -5557,7 +5557,7 @@ iqn.2012-06.com.example:target0 - Connecting to a Target With a Configuration + <title>Connecting to a Target with a Configuration File To connect using a configuration file, create