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From: Brooks Davis <brooks@one-eyed-alien.net>
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Subject: Re: Help on the wireless document
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On Wed, Nov 02, 2005 at 04:20:16PM +0800, loader wrote:
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> Hi all,=20
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> I was working with Sam on a wireless howto, and I've tried to
> finish documenting what I could (It's very incomplete). I need=20
> some help cleaning it up, correcting my mistakes, and mergeing=20
> it with the existing wireless section into the Handbook.=20

Overall this looks quite good.  This will be an excellent addition to
the docs.  One comments:

In this bit:

	Then, let's bring up the interface:
	# /etc/rc.d/netif start

did you names "netif start" or "netif start ath0"?  The second is
probably better.

-- Brooks

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