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From: Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Tue, 17 Jul 2001 14:35:41 -0700 (PDT)
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Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users chapter.sgml
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murray      2001/07/17 14:35:41 PDT

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  Wrap author attribution in <chapterinfo>.
  
  Reword a couple of run-on sentences to use better subject-verb
  agreement.
  
  Terminate all items in a list with a period, not just some of
  them.
  
  Add <username> and <application> tags as appropriate.
  
  "pw(8) has the information"
  
  doesn't look well without the benefits of a hyperlink.  Reword this to:
  
  "For more information, please see pw(8)."
  
  Update example to change shells to zsh since tcsh is now in the base
  system.
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.14      +62 -52    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.sgml


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