From owner-freebsd-doc Sat Dec 8 2:41:32 2001 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from nothing-going-on.demon.co.uk (pc-62-31-42-140-hy.blueyonder.co.uk [62.31.42.140]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id CADD837B416 for ; Sat, 8 Dec 2001 02:41:28 -0800 (PST) Received: (from nik@localhost) by nothing-going-on.demon.co.uk (8.11.3/8.11.3) id fB8ANEn95425; Sat, 8 Dec 2001 10:23:14 GMT (envelope-from nik) Date: Sat, 8 Dec 2001 10:23:14 +0000 From: Nik Clayton To: Michael Lucas Cc: doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: if you feel like reviewing... Message-ID: <20011208102314.G98994@clan.nothing-going-on.org> References: <20011206140729.A5683@blackhelicopters.org> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-md5; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="L1c6L/cjZjI9d0Eq" Content-Disposition: inline User-Agent: Mutt/1.2.5i In-Reply-To: <20011206140729.A5683@blackhelicopters.org>; from mwlucas@blackhelicopters.org on Thu, Dec 06, 2001 at 02:07:29PM -0500 Organization: FreeBSD Project Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org --L1c6L/cjZjI9d0Eq Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Thu, Dec 06, 2001 at 02:07:29PM -0500, Michael Lucas wrote: > Well, since I got my commit bit shortly before both my esteemed mentor > and I left town, Nik suggested that I have -doc review things. I'm > still not going to commit them until bmah approves of them, mind you, > but I'm more comfortable if folks have every possible chance to shoot > things down before I go near the repo. >=20 > At www.blackhelicopters.org/~mwlucas/patches you'll see my uncommitted > work (and a directory of old crap, please ignore). Comments welcome. authors.ent Fine contributors.patch Fine goals2 You've got a relative link to the copyright page. That's not going to work when people are looking at the FAQ locally. Best to make it a full link to the license at http://www.FreeBSD.org/ Apart from that, fine. mirror-web Fine release-made Almost fine. In "mirror-web" you removed the "Certainly!", in this one, you retained "latest goodies". Perhaps "latest changes" or "latest technologies" would be better? Your call. tracking-release Fine. N --=20 FreeBSD: The Power to Serve http://www.freebsd.org/ FreeBSD Documentation Project http://www.freebsd.org/docproj/ --- 15B8 3FFC DDB4 34B0 AA5F 94B7 93A8 0764 2C37 E375 --- --L1c6L/cjZjI9d0Eq Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.0.6 (FreeBSD) Comment: For info see http://www.gnupg.org iEYEARECAAYFAjwR6hEACgkQk6gHZCw343WlMwCeLpSKySjae8eFIjE3Jwm6UZ6n 8asAn33FYhJHXkq3KDykb8+ljyduvNlF =97XE -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --L1c6L/cjZjI9d0Eq-- To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message