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Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook Makefile
 book.sgml chapters.ent
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Tom Rhodes wrote:
> On Sun, 28 Sep 2008 16:44:57 +0300
> Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.org> wrote:
>
>   
>> On Sun, 28 Sep 2008 12:54:12 +0000 (UTC), Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org> wrote:
>>     
>>> trhodes     2008-09-28 12:54:12 UTC
>>>
>>>   FreeBSD doc repository
>>>
>>>   Modified files:
>>>     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook Makefile book.sgml chapters.ent
>>>   Log:
>>>   Add the DTrace, file systems, and Updating chapters to the build.  They
>>>   need a bit more fleshing out, but there is no reason why they should
>>>   remain local patches anymore.
>>>
>>>   Reviewed by:    remko, pgj, manolis, keramida
>>>       
>> Thanks!  These are nice chapters, and now we have something cool to
>> point users to when they ask about DTrace and ZFS :)
>>
>>
>>     
>
> Can't wait to point people at work toward this.  :)
>
> Thanks for you help with this!
>
>   
Another small thing, in updating chapter:
...
compare the system against a secure disk. Such as a DVD or securely 
stored external USB disk device.
...

I guess it should be one sentence like "...disk such as a DVD or..."
Maybe I'm wrong here.

thanks,

Ganbold