Date: Tue, 2 Dec 2014 11:26:58 +0000 (UTC) From: Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r46047 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks Message-ID: <201412021126.sB2BQwMd066191@svn.freebsd.org>
next in thread | raw e-mail | index | archive | help
Author: bcr Date: Tue Dec 2 11:26:58 2014 New Revision: 46047 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/46047 Log: Remove redundant markup and words in a sentence. Provide proper capitalization in title tags. Obtained from: igor(8) output Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml Tue Dec 2 11:15:50 2014 (r46046) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml Tue Dec 2 11:26:58 2014 (r46047) @@ -1604,8 +1604,8 @@ scsibus1: <para>Instead, one can use <command>dump</command> and <command>restore</command> in a more secure fashion over an <acronym>SSH</acronym> connection. This example creates a - full, compressed backup of the <filename>/usr</filename> file - system and sends the backup file to the specified host over a + full, compressed backup of <filename>/usr</filename> and sends + the backup file to the specified host over a <acronym>SSH</acronym> connection.</para> <example> @@ -1656,7 +1656,7 @@ scsibus1: same directory that is being backed up.</para> <example> - <title>Backing Up the Current Directory With + <title>Backing Up the Current Directory with <command>tar</command></title> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>tar czvf <replaceable>/tmp/mybackup.tgz</replaceable> . </userinput></screen> @@ -1670,7 +1670,7 @@ scsibus1: backup to restore.</para> <example> - <title>Restoring Up the Current Directory With + <title>Restoring Up the Current Directory with <command>tar</command></title> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>tar xzvf <replaceable>/tmp/mybackup.tgz</replaceable></userinput></screen> @@ -1728,7 +1728,7 @@ scsibus1: examples would be:</para> <example> - <title>Backing Up the Current Directory With + <title>Backing Up the Current Directory with <command>pax</command></title> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pax -wf <replaceable>/tmp/mybackup.pax</replaceable> .</userinput></screen>
Want to link to this message? Use this URL: <https://mail-archive.FreeBSD.org/cgi/mid.cgi?201412021126.sB2BQwMd066191>