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Author: dru
Date: Wed Apr 23 20:28:36 2014
New Revision: 44640
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44640

Log:
  Fix grammo.
  Remove no longer needed sentence.
  
  Sponsored by:	iXsystems

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml	Wed Apr 23 20:27:03 2014	(r44639)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml	Wed Apr 23 20:28:36 2014	(r44640)
@@ -649,12 +649,9 @@ da0: &lt;STECH Simple Drive 1.04&gt; s/n
 
     <para>The &os; Ports Collection provides several utilities for
       burning and duplicating audio and data <acronym>CD</acronym>s.
-      Which tool to use to burn a <acronym>CD</acronym> depends
-      on whether the <acronym>CD</acronym> burner is an
-      <acronym>ATAPI</acronym>, <acronym>SCSI</acronym>, or
-      <acronym>USB</acronym> device.  This chapter demonstrates the
+      This chapter demonstrates the
       use of several command line utilities.  For
-      <acronym>CD</acronym> burning software with a graphical,
+      <acronym>CD</acronym> burning software with a graphical utility,
       consider installing the <package>sysutils/xcdroast</package> or
       <package>sysutils/k3b</package> packages or ports.</para>