From owner-cvs-all@FreeBSD.ORG Wed Dec 31 08:30:06 2008 Return-Path: Delivered-To: cvs-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 966771065670; Wed, 31 Dec 2008 08:30:06 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@elvandar.org) Received: from websrv01.jr-hosting.nl (websrv01.jr-hosting.nl [78.47.69.233]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 532EA8FC13; Wed, 31 Dec 2008 08:30:06 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@elvandar.org) Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1] helo=galain.elvandar.org) by websrv01.jr-hosting.nl with esmtpa (Exim 4.69 (FreeBSD)) (envelope-from ) id 1LHvrs-000F5B-KS; Wed, 31 Dec 2008 08:51:52 +0100 Received: from 78.46.66.244 (SquirrelMail authenticated user remko) by galain.elvandar.org with HTTP; Wed, 31 Dec 2008 08:51:52 +0100 (CET) Message-ID: In-Reply-To: <200812310400.mBV40Tgh020523@repoman.freebsd.org> References: <200812310400.mBV40Tgh020523@repoman.freebsd.org> Date: Wed, 31 Dec 2008 08:51:52 +0100 (CET) From: "Remko Lodder" To: "Murray Stokely" User-Agent: SquirrelMail/1.4.16 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain;charset=iso-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-Priority: 3 (Normal) Importance: Normal Cc: doc-committers@freebsd.org, cvs-doc@freebsd.org, cvs-all@freebsd.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: www/en index.xsl X-BeenThere: cvs-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: remko@elvandar.org List-Id: **OBSOLETE** CVS commit messages for the entire tree List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 31 Dec 2008 08:30:07 -0000 On Wed, December 31, 2008 5:00 am, Murray Stokely wrote: > murray 2008-12-31 04:00:29 UTC > > FreeBSD doc repository > > Modified files: > en index.xsl > Log: > Improve the main paragraph on the front page of www.FreeBSD.org. > > We only have a few sentences so we should use it to describe why > FreeBSD is relevant and interesting. Spending half of the paragraph > listing 7 trademark symbols and the hardware platforms supported is > not at all a compelling introduction to what is great about FreeBSD > (to be fair it worked fine when we supported fewer platforms). > > Point out some of the FreeBSD highlights as succinctly as possible to > entice users to click through to more of the second level pages: > FreeBSD works on modern server, desktop, and embedded computer > platforms, has great networking and security features, is used by some > of the busiest web sites and most pervasive embedded devices, has over > 30 years of continuous development, etc.. > > Add links to the platforms page and large users of FreeBSD section of > the Handbook. > > Reviewed by: marketing@ (rwatson, mwlucas, gnn) > Hey Murray! Thanks!! This does sound very cool! -- /"\ Best regards, | remko@FreeBSD.org \ / Remko Lodder | remko@EFnet X http://www.evilcoder.org/ | / \ ASCII Ribbon Campaign | Against HTML Mail and News