Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2013 02:53:01 -0400 From: Matt Penna <matthew.penna@gmail.com> To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: docs/182004: Missing a word(a nother solution). Message-ID: <9DED8DEE-59BC-4297-8C83-03D84A236B71@gmail.com> In-Reply-To: <201309110037.r8B0bL60040170@oldred.freebsd.org> References: <201309110037.r8B0bL60040170@oldred.freebsd.org>
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On Sep 10, 2013, at 8:37 PM, Li <fender0107401@gmail.com> wrote: >> Number: 182004 >> Category: docs >> Synopsis: Missing a word(a nother solution). >> Confidential: no >> Severity: non-critical >> Priority: low >> Responsible: freebsd-doc >> State: open >> Quarter: =20 >> Keywords: =20 >> Date-Required: >> Class: doc-bug >> Submitter-Id: current-users >> Arrival-Date: Wed Sep 11 00:40:00 UTC 2013 >> Closed-Date: >> Last-Modified: >> Originator: Li >> Release: 9.1 Release >> Organization: >> Environment: >> Description: > I am sorry. >=20 > I reported this problem a few minutes ago, but I did not give a = perfect solution. >=20 > In our handbook: 7.5.3. KMyMoney >=20 > Here is the original sentence: > KMyMoney is a personal finance created by the KDE community. >=20 > I think the better one should be: > KMyMoney is a personal financial tool created by the KDE community. >=20 > =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D >=20 > In other words, I think we should add =93tool=94 and also change = =93finance=94 to =93financial=94. In this case, I think the original suggestion of "personal finance tool" = is more correct. "Personal finance" is a widely used term. Compare to = "corporate finance" or "public finance." (I just rejoined the list after an 11-year hiatus. Greetings to all.) Matt=
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