From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Dec 6 09:27:19 2004 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 70B7216A4CE; Mon, 6 Dec 2004 09:27:19 +0000 (GMT) Received: from mail.elvandar.org (redqueen.elvandar.org [217.148.169.55]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E963643D1F; Mon, 6 Dec 2004 09:27:18 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from remko@freebsd.org) Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by mail.elvandar.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7BE0829542D; Mon, 6 Dec 2004 10:27:17 +0100 (CET) Received: from mail.elvandar.org ([127.0.0.1]) by localhost (redqueen.elvandar.org [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id 78751-17; Mon, 6 Dec 2004 10:27:16 +0100 (CET) Message-ID: <41B425FB.5020601@FreeBSD.org> Date: Mon, 06 Dec 2004 10:27:23 +0100 From: Remko Lodder User-Agent: Mozilla Thunderbird 0.9 (Windows/20041103) X-Accept-Language: en-us, en MIME-Version: 1.0 To: Murray Stokely References: <200412050014.iB50EMgA007188@repoman.freebsd.org> In-Reply-To: <200412050014.iB50EMgA007188@repoman.freebsd.org> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at elvandar.org cc: doc@FreeBSD.org cc: cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org cc: throdes@freebsd.org cc: cvs-all@FreeBSD.org cc: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook Makefilebook.sgml chapters.ent doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls Makefile chapter.sgml X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 06 Dec 2004 09:27:19 -0000 Murray Stokely wrote: > murray 2004-12-05 00:14:22 UTC > > FreeBSD doc repository > > Modified files: > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook Makefile book.sgml chapters.ent > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security chapter.sgml > Added files: > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls Makefile chapter.sgml > Log: > Remove the bulging firewalls section from the security chapter into a > new chapter all its own, currently in the 'network communications' > part as chapter 24. > > Add a small paragraph at the bottom of the security chapter synopsis > noting that additional security topics are covered in the MAC chapter > and the Firewall chapter. > > While here add some missing punctuation, cleanup the whitespace, add > missing tags, add a synopsis, and of course > s/ > Revision Changes Path > 1.91 +1 -0 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/Makefile > 1.157 +5 -0 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/book.sgml > 1.29 +1 -0 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/chapters.ent > 1.1 +15 -0 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/Makefile (new) > 1.1 +2868 -0 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.sgml (new) > 1.250 +4 -2774 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml Hi, I feel a bit passed by by this commit :(. I was preparing a split of the chapter as i mentioned on doc@. You even replied to that and still you took this out of my hand without asking me or so. Makes me feel a little sad. So i would like to hear how we all can arrange that these things will not happen again. Thanks -- Kind regards, Remko Lodder FreeBSD (Dutch) Documentation Team