From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Dec 12 23:58:54 2004 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id F339D16A4CE for ; Sun, 12 Dec 2004 23:58:53 +0000 (GMT) Received: from zaphod.nitro.dk (port324.ds1-khk.adsl.cybercity.dk [212.242.113.79]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8666A43D39 for ; Sun, 12 Dec 2004 23:58:53 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from simon@zaphod.nitro.dk) Received: by zaphod.nitro.dk (Postfix, from userid 3000) id 6BFB011D76; Mon, 13 Dec 2004 00:58:52 +0100 (CET) Date: Mon, 13 Dec 2004 00:58:52 +0100 From: "Simon L. Nielsen" To: Mark Linimon Message-ID: <20041212235851.GM767@zaphod.nitro.dk> References: Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha1; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="prC3/KjdfqNV7evK" Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.6i cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: CFD: update to Porter's Handbook to document build Makevars X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 12 Dec 2004 23:58:54 -0000 --prC3/KjdfqNV7evK Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On 2004.12.12 16:49:06 -0600, Mark Linimon wrote: > I plan to commit it unless someone points out any markup bugs. If few nits below, otherwise it looks good. > Index: book.sgml > =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D > RCS file: /home/FreeBSD/dcvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/b= ook.sgml,v > retrieving revision 1.500 > diff -u -r1.500 book.sgml > --- book.sgml 12 Dec 2004 14:15:09 -0000 1.500 > +++ book.sgml 12 Dec 2004 21:26:58 -0000 > @@ -3484,6 +3484,12 @@ > package itself, or else forcing its installation with > FORCE_PKG_REGISTER will no longer work. > > + > + > + CONFLICTS automatically sets > + IGNORE, which is more fully documented > + here. Links which says "here" is generally a bad idea, they will not really make sense in a printed version.. I would suggest: in . [...] > + If a port sould be marked IGNORE > + only on certain architectures, there are two other > + convenience variables that will automatically set > + IGNORE for you: > + ONLY_FOR_ARCHS and > + NOT_FOR_ARCHS. Examples: > + > + ONLY_FOR_ARCHS =3D i386 amd64 > + > + NOT_FOR_ARCHS =3D alpha ia64 sparc64 Isn't there normally no space between the variable name and the equal character in the ports Makefiles? > @@ -8285,7 +8346,7 @@ > The &os; Ports Collection is constantly changing. Here is > some information on how to keep up. > =20 > - > + Was it intetionally that you used capital letters here? > FreshPorts > =20 > One of the easiest ways to learn about updates that have > @@ -8345,8 +8406,8 @@ > =20 > > =20 > - > - The &os; Port Building Cluster > + > + The &os; Port Building Cluster on pointyhat I would suggest: The &os; Port Building Cluster on <hostid role=3D"hostname">pointyhat</hostid> --=20 Simon L. Nielsen --prC3/KjdfqNV7evK Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.2.6 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQFBvNs7h9pcDSc1mlERAqB6AKDFrkM5C0ngqM0GV0jGIG3sJC7f9wCeJ9Di gzSBCdQ41t4FSenTABjwS8s= =o9x0 -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --prC3/KjdfqNV7evK--