Date: Fri, 12 Jul 2013 14:53:47 -0400 (EDT) From: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU> To: Warren Block <wblock@freebsd.org> Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r42257 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer Message-ID: <alpine.GSO.1.10.1307121441070.26275@multics.mit.edu> In-Reply-To: <201307120321.r6C3Ltph034632@svn.freebsd.org> References: <201307120321.r6C3Ltph034632@svn.freebsd.org>
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On Fri, 12 Jul 2013, Warren Block wrote: > Author: wblock > Date: Fri Jul 12 03:21:55 2013 > New Revision: 42257 > URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42257 > > Log: > Edit for clarity and style. Try to persuade the hippo and the pogo stick > that they are not good for each other. > > Modified: > head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer/chapter.xml > > Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer/chapter.xml > ============================================================================== > --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer/chapter.xml Fri Jul 12 02:59:50 2013 (r42256) > +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer/chapter.xml Fri Jul 12 03:21:55 2013 (r42257) > @@ -100,42 +100,40 @@ > - <para>Obviously, if you are going to use markup you need to define > - what your markup means, and how it should be interpreted. You > - will need a markup language that you can follow when marking up > - your documents.</para> > + <para>Markup languages define what > + what the markup means and how it should be interpreted.</para> What what?! > @@ -680,48 +665,45 @@ example.xml:5: element head: validity er > - <para>Look at the contents of > + <para>Examine the contents of > <filename>/usr/local/share/xml/dtd/xhtml/catalog.xml</filename>. > - This is the catalog file for the XHTML DTDs that will have > - been installed as part of the <filename > + This is the catalog file for the <acronym>XHTML</acronym> <acronym>DTD</acronym>s that was s/was/were/ -Ben > + installed as part of the <filename > role="package">textproc/docproj</filename> port.</para> > </sect3> >
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