From owner-svn-doc-head@FreeBSD.ORG Thu Apr 24 21:46:37 2014 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [8.8.178.115]) (using TLSv1 with cipher ADH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id B50F3869; Thu, 24 Apr 2014 21:46:37 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id A1849139A; Thu, 24 Apr 2014 21:46:37 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.8/8.14.8) with ESMTP id s3OLkbpt055386; Thu, 24 Apr 2014 21:46:37 GMT (envelope-from dru@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from dru@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.8/8.14.8/Submit) id s3OLkbIa055385; Thu, 24 Apr 2014 21:46:37 GMT (envelope-from dru@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201404242146.s3OLkbIa055385@svn.freebsd.org> From: Dru Lavigne Date: Thu, 24 Apr 2014 21:46:37 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r44653 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.17 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for the doc tree for head List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 24 Apr 2014 21:46:37 -0000 Author: dru Date: Thu Apr 24 21:46:37 2014 New Revision: 44653 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44653 Log: Fix filesystem and use of "just" and "simply". Sponsored by: iXsystems Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Thu Apr 24 21:42:26 2014 (r44652) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Thu Apr 24 21:46:37 2014 (r44653) @@ -530,7 +530,7 @@ not a regular file. It is an image of the complete contents of the memory stick. It cannot - simply be copied like a regular file, but must be + be copied like a regular file, but must be written directly to the target device with &man.dd.1;: @@ -780,7 +780,7 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID - This is the prompt used on systems with just one + This is the prompt used on systems with one CPU. @@ -1384,8 +1384,8 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is - The entire disk can be allocated to &os;, or just a - portion of it. If + The entire disk or a portion of it can be allocated to &os;. + If [ Entire Disk ] is chosen, a general partition layout filling the whole disk is created. Selecting @@ -1546,7 +1546,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is freebsd-ufs - A &os; UFS - filesystem. + file system. @@ -1562,11 +1562,11 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is of the available GPT partition types. - Multiple filesystem partitions can be used, and some + Multiple file system partitions can be used, and some people may prefer a traditional layout with separate partitions for the /, /var, /tmp, and - /usr filesystems. See + /usr file systems. See for an example. @@ -1587,7 +1587,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is A mountpoint is needed if this partition will contain a - filesystem. If only a single UFS partition will be created, + file system. If only a single UFS partition will be created, the mountpoint should be /. A label is also requested. A label @@ -1604,7 +1604,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is in /dev/. - Use a unique label on every filesystem to avoid + Use a unique label on every file system to avoid conflicts from identical labels. A few letters from the computer's name, use, or location can be added to the label. For instance, labroot or @@ -1613,13 +1613,13 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is - Creating Traditional Split Filesystem + <title>Creating Traditional Split File System Partitions For a traditional partition layout where the /, /var, /tmp, and /usr - directories are separate filesystems on their own + directories are separate file systems on their own partitions, create a GPT partitioning scheme, then create the partitions as shown. Partition sizes shown are typical for a 20G target disk. If more space is available on the @@ -2909,7 +2909,8 @@ login: &os; Shutdown Proper shutdown of a &os; computer helps protect data and - even hardware from damage. Do not just turn off the power. + even hardware from damage. Do not turn off the power before + the system has been properly shut down. If the user is a member of the wheel group, become the superuser by typing su at the command