Date: Fri, 12 Jul 2013 16:02:55 -0600 (MDT) From: Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com> To: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU> Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org, Warren Block <wblock@freebsd.org> Subject: Re: svn commit: r42257 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer Message-ID: <alpine.BSF.2.00.1307121601470.3231@wonkity.com> In-Reply-To: <alpine.GSO.1.10.1307121441070.26275@multics.mit.edu> References: <201307120321.r6C3Ltph034632@svn.freebsd.org> <alpine.GSO.1.10.1307121441070.26275@multics.mit.edu>
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On Fri, 12 Jul 2013, Benjamin Kaduk wrote: > On Fri, 12 Jul 2013, Warren Block wrote: > >> Author: wblock >> Date: Fri Jul 12 03:21:55 2013 >> New Revision: 42257 >> URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42257 >> >> Log: >> Edit for clarity and style. Try to persuade the hippo and the pogo stick >> that they are not good for each other. >> >> Modified: >> head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer/chapter.xml >> >> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer/chapter.xml >> ============================================================================== >> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer/chapter.xml Fri >> Jul 12 02:59:50 2013 (r42256) >> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer/chapter.xml Fri >> Jul 12 03:21:55 2013 (r42257) >> @@ -100,42 +100,40 @@ >> - <para>Obviously, if you are going to use markup you need to define >> - what your markup means, and how it should be interpreted. You >> - will need a markup language that you can follow when marking up >> - your documents.</para> >> + <para>Markup languages define what >> + what the markup means and how it should be interpreted.</para> > > What what?! Fixed in a later commit. If only there were a program that could be run to detect problems like that. >> @@ -680,48 +665,45 @@ example.xml:5: element head: validity er >> - <para>Look at the contents of >> + <para>Examine the contents of >> <filename>/usr/local/share/xml/dtd/xhtml/catalog.xml</filename>. >> - This is the catalog file for the XHTML DTDs that will have >> - been installed as part of the <filename >> + This is the catalog file for the <acronym>XHTML</acronym> >> <acronym>DTD</acronym>s that was > > s/was/were/ Oops, fixed. Thanks!
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