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Date:      Sat, 21 Dec 2019 14:23:02 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Chris Rees <crees@FreeBSD.org>
To:        doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r53703 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq
Message-ID:  <201912211423.xBLEN2nP001758@repo.freebsd.org>

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Author: crees
Date: Sat Dec 21 14:23:02 2019
New Revision: 53703
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/53703

Log:
  Add missing 'performance' to 'can improve system'.
  
  Translators, this is unlikely to be an issue in other languages, so please
  forgive the whitespace changes too.
  
  PR:		docs/242330
  Submitted by:	pauamma@gundo.com
  Differential Revision:	https://reviews.freebsd.org/D22895

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Sat Dec 21 03:01:05 2019	(r53702)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Sat Dec 21 14:23:02 2019	(r53703)
@@ -3355,8 +3355,8 @@ kern.sched.name: ULE</screen>
 	    the data.  If an application has a heavy write load,
 	    storing the ZIL in a separate device that has very fast
 	    synchronous, sequential write performance can improve
-	    overall system.  For other workloads, a SSD is unlikely to
-	    make much of an improvement.</para>
+	    overall system performance.  For other workloads, a SSD
+	    is unlikely to make much of an improvement.</para>
 	</answer>
       </qandaentry>
 



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