From owner-cvs-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jan 29 02:54:43 2012 Return-Path: Delivered-To: cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5EB0B106564A; Sun, 29 Jan 2012 02:54:43 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from wblock@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (repoman.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::29]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 346828FC14; Sun, 29 Jan 2012 02:54:43 +0000 (UTC) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4) with ESMTP id q0T2shfd001052; Sun, 29 Jan 2012 02:54:43 GMT (envelope-from wblock@repoman.freebsd.org) Received: (from wblock@localhost) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4/Submit) id q0T2sh1K001051; Sun, 29 Jan 2012 02:54:43 GMT (envelope-from wblock) Message-Id: <201201290254.q0T2sh1K001051@repoman.freebsd.org> From: Warren Block Date: Sun, 29 Jan 2012 02:54:43 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org X-FreeBSD-CVS-Branch: HEAD Cc: Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security chapter.sgml X-BeenThere: cvs-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: CVS commit messages for the doc and www trees List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 29 Jan 2012 02:54:43 -0000 wblock 2012-01-29 02:54:43 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security chapter.sgml Log: Unabbreviate "versus", correct "build" to "built", add comma to i.e., Insert spaces before callouts to improve readability. Revision Changes Path 1.344 +22 -22 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml