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From: Chris Costello <chris@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Wed, 6 Jun 2001 09:50:25 -0700 (PDT)
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Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/faq book.sgml
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chris       2001/06/06 09:50:23 PDT

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/faq book.sgml 
  Log:
  Clean up some of the questions in the FAQ.  Namely:
   o Convert statements ("I'd like to become a Web mirror") into questions
     ("How do I become a Web mirror?").
   o Properly mark up errors with <errorname> instead of <literal>.
  
  And a minor nit:
   o Refer to the X window system as the X window system (instead of "the X
     window").
  
  Reviewed by:	nik, dd, Arnaud S. Launay <asl@launay.org>
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.207     +178 -158  doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml


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