From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Thu Feb 27 16:55:09 2014 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) (using TLSv1 with cipher ADH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id A37C458F; Thu, 27 Feb 2014 16:55:09 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 8FD471B6C; Thu, 27 Feb 2014 16:55:09 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.8/8.14.8) with ESMTP id s1RGt9iC061071; Thu, 27 Feb 2014 16:55:09 GMT (envelope-from dru@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from dru@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.8/8.14.8/Submit) id s1RGt9me061070; Thu, 27 Feb 2014 16:55:09 GMT (envelope-from dru@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201402271655.s1RGt9me061070@svn.freebsd.org> From: Dru Lavigne Date: Thu, 27 Feb 2014 16:55:09 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r44086 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.17 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 27 Feb 2014 16:55:09 -0000 Author: dru Date: Thu Feb 27 16:55:09 2014 New Revision: 44086 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44086 Log: Fix some grammos. Submitted by: bjk Sponsored by: iXsystems Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.xml Thu Feb 27 16:40:11 2014 (r44085) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.xml Thu Feb 27 16:55:09 2014 (r44086) @@ -1808,11 +1808,11 @@ options IPDIVERT # enables NAT RULE_NUMBER - Each rule is associated with a number in the - range of 1 to + Each rule is associated with a number from + 1 to 65534. The number is used to indicate the order of rule processing. Multiple rules - can have the same number, in which case they are checked + can have the same number, in which case they are applied according to the order in which they have been added. @@ -1821,8 +1821,8 @@ options IPDIVERT # enables NAT SET_NUMBER - Each rule is associated with a set number in the - range of 0 to 31. + Each rule is associated with a set number from + 0 to 31. Sets can be individually disabled or enabled, making it possible to quickly add or delete a set of rules. If a SET_NUMBER is not specified, the rule will be added to @@ -1854,11 +1854,11 @@ options IPDIVERT # enables NATlimit rule. count: updates counters for - all packets that match rule. The search continues with + all packets that match the rule. The search continues with the next rule. deny | drop: either word - discards packets that match this rule. + silently discards packets that match this rule. Additional actions are available. Refer to &man.ipfw.8; for details. @@ -1873,7 +1873,7 @@ options IPDIVERT # enables NATSECURITY. Logging only occurs if the number of packets logged for that particular rule does - not exceed the optional specified LOG_AMOUNT. If no + not exceed a specified LOG_AMOUNT. If no LOG_AMOUNT is specified, the limit is taken from the value of net.inet.ip.fw.verbose_limit. A @@ -1905,7 +1905,7 @@ options IPDIVERT # enables NAT The from keyword must be followed by the source address or a keyword that represents the - source address. An address can be represented by the + source address. An address can be represented by any, me (any address configured on an interface on this system), me6, (any IPv6