From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Apr 21 22:53:06 2014 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) (using TLSv1 with cipher ADH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id E7D6FA25; Mon, 21 Apr 2014 22:53:06 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id D488312E8; Mon, 21 Apr 2014 22:53:06 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.8/8.14.8) with ESMTP id s3LMr6rv077488; Mon, 21 Apr 2014 22:53:06 GMT (envelope-from dru@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from dru@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.8/8.14.8/Submit) id s3LMr6c9077487; Mon, 21 Apr 2014 22:53:06 GMT (envelope-from dru@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201404212253.s3LMr6c9077487@svn.freebsd.org> From: Dru Lavigne Date: Mon, 21 Apr 2014 22:53:06 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r44624 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.17 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 21 Apr 2014 22:53:07 -0000 Author: dru Date: Mon Apr 21 22:53:06 2014 New Revision: 44624 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44624 Log: Fix two grammos. Submitted by: wblock Sponsored by: iXsystems Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.xml Mon Apr 21 22:51:01 2014 (r44623) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.xml Mon Apr 21 22:53:06 2014 (r44624) @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ How to boot into single- and multi-user mode and how to - properly shutdown a &os; system. + properly shut down a &os; system. @@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ the remainder of the operating system. If multiple operating systems are present, a different boot manager can be installed which displays the list of operating - systems so that the user can choose which one to boot from. + systems so that the user can choose which one to boot. The remainder of the &os; bootstrap system is divided into three stages. The first stage knows just enough to get the