From owner-freebsd-doc Fri Nov 23 9:36:58 2001 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx0.grolier.fr (relay.grolier.fr [194.158.96.33]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 08F5D37B419; Fri, 23 Nov 2001 09:36:46 -0800 (PST) Received: from hautmedoc.dockes.com (bas33-157.idf.w.club-internet.fr [212.194.25.157]) by mx0.grolier.fr (Postfix) with ESMTP id 38C22C52D; Fri, 23 Nov 2001 18:36:39 +0100 (CET) Received: (from dockes@localhost) by hautmedoc.dockes.com (8.11.6/8.11.6) id fANHadq18121; Fri, 23 Nov 2001 18:36:39 +0100 (CET) (envelope-from dockes) From: Jean-Francois Dockes MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Message-ID: <15358.35110.946306.349013@hautmedoc.dockes.com> Date: Fri, 23 Nov 2001 18:36:38 +0100 To: Murray Stokely Cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Subject: Re: Sound subsystem chapter for the developers handbook In-Reply-To: <20011123070923.V27929@windriver.com> References: <15356.46562.665297.828958@hautmedoc.dockes.com> <20011123070923.V27929@windriver.com> X-Mailer: VM 6.95 under 21.1 (patch 14) "Cuyahoga Valley" XEmacs Lucid Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org Murray Stokely writes: > I found a couple of minor grammar nits, and several instances where > markup should be changed into something more descriptive. > I started the diff here but didn't make a complete pass through the > document because I think you can finish where I started. Ok, I think I replaced most tags. I updated the files: HTML: http://perso.wanadoo.fr/dockes/developers-handbook/oss.html Source: http://perso.wanadoo.fr/dockes/developers-handbook/sound/chapter.sgml Suggested patch for Makefile, etc..: http://perso.wanadoo.fr/dockes/developers-handbook/sound/dhb.patch JF To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message