From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Fri Jul 12 22:03:03 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [8.8.178.115]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6BBEDFDD; Fri, 12 Jul 2013 22:03:03 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from wblock@wonkity.com) Received: from wonkity.com (wonkity.com [67.158.26.137]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1406511A9; Fri, 12 Jul 2013 22:03:02 +0000 (UTC) Received: from wonkity.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by wonkity.com (8.14.7/8.14.7) with ESMTP id r6CM2tvh003295; Fri, 12 Jul 2013 16:02:55 -0600 (MDT) (envelope-from wblock@wonkity.com) Received: from localhost (wblock@localhost) by wonkity.com (8.14.7/8.14.7/Submit) with ESMTP id r6CM2tIH003292; Fri, 12 Jul 2013 16:02:55 -0600 (MDT) (envelope-from wblock@wonkity.com) Date: Fri, 12 Jul 2013 16:02:55 -0600 (MDT) From: Warren Block To: Benjamin Kaduk Subject: Re: svn commit: r42257 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer In-Reply-To: Message-ID: References: <201307120321.r6C3Ltph034632@svn.freebsd.org> User-Agent: Alpine 2.00 (BSF 1167 2008-08-23) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; charset=US-ASCII; format=flowed X-Greylist: Sender IP whitelisted, not delayed by milter-greylist-4.4.3 (wonkity.com [127.0.0.1]); Fri, 12 Jul 2013 16:02:56 -0600 (MDT) Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org, Warren Block X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 12 Jul 2013 22:03:03 -0000 On Fri, 12 Jul 2013, Benjamin Kaduk wrote: > On Fri, 12 Jul 2013, Warren Block wrote: > >> Author: wblock >> Date: Fri Jul 12 03:21:55 2013 >> New Revision: 42257 >> URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42257 >> >> Log: >> Edit for clarity and style. Try to persuade the hippo and the pogo stick >> that they are not good for each other. >> >> Modified: >> head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer/chapter.xml >> >> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer/chapter.xml >> ============================================================================== >> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer/chapter.xml Fri >> Jul 12 02:59:50 2013 (r42256) >> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer/chapter.xml Fri >> Jul 12 03:21:55 2013 (r42257) >> @@ -100,42 +100,40 @@ >> - Obviously, if you are going to use markup you need to define >> - what your markup means, and how it should be interpreted. You >> - will need a markup language that you can follow when marking up >> - your documents. >> + Markup languages define what >> + what the markup means and how it should be interpreted. > > What what?! Fixed in a later commit. If only there were a program that could be run to detect problems like that. >> @@ -680,48 +665,45 @@ example.xml:5: element head: validity er >> - Look at the contents of >> + Examine the contents of >> /usr/local/share/xml/dtd/xhtml/catalog.xml. >> - This is the catalog file for the XHTML DTDs that will have >> - been installed as part of the > + This is the catalog file for the XHTML >> DTDs that was > > s/was/were/ Oops, fixed. Thanks!