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gabor       2008-01-06 20:08:07 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en/internal          fortunes.sgml 
  Log:
  - Reword a paragraph to be politically neutral [1]
  - Reword a part with the word poignant so that non-native English speakers
    can understand it without a dictionary [2]
  - Remove the non-offensive list as everything belongs to this category which
    does not meet the conditions of offensitivity [2]
  - s/will/may/
  - Whitespace
  
  PR:             www/118284 [1]
  Submitted by:   bsam [1], wilko [2]
  Reviewed by:    wes
  Approved by:    core
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.6       +8 -17     www/en/internal/fortunes.sgml