From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Aug 15 14:00:39 2005 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3903C16A41F for ; Mon, 15 Aug 2005 14:00:39 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [216.136.204.21]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id EFA5143D5A for ; Mon, 15 Aug 2005 14:00:37 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.3/8.13.3) with ESMTP id j7FE0b2P031780 for ; Mon, 15 Aug 2005 14:00:37 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.3/8.13.1/Submit) id j7FE0b4b031779; Mon, 15 Aug 2005 14:00:37 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Mon, 15 Aug 2005 14:00:37 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <200508151400.j7FE0b4b031779@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 430D316A41F for ; Mon, 15 Aug 2005 13:53:29 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from zanchey@ucc.gu.uwa.edu.au) Received: from asclepius.uwa.edu.au (asclepius2.uwa.edu.au [130.95.128.59]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6F04243D46 for ; Mon, 15 Aug 2005 13:53:27 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from zanchey@ucc.gu.uwa.edu.au) Received: from asclepius.kas (localhost.localdomain [127.0.0.1]) by asclepius.uwa.edu.au (Postfix) with SMTP id 57155184142 for ; Mon, 15 Aug 2005 21:53:21 +0800 (WST) Received: from asclepius (localhost.localdomain [127.0.0.1]) by asclepius.prekas (Postfix) with SMTP id 467F5183940 for ; Mon, 15 Aug 2005 21:53:21 +0800 (WST) Received: from mooneye.ucc.gu.uwa.edu.au (mooneye.ucc.gu.uwa.edu.au [130.95.13.9]) by asclepius.input (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2EDFA184259 for ; Mon, 15 Aug 2005 21:53:21 +0800 (WST) Received: by mooneye.ucc.gu.uwa.edu.au (Postfix, from userid 801) id 87C2017E0D; Mon, 15 Aug 2005 21:53:20 +0800 (WST) Received: from mussel.ucc.gu.uwa.edu.au (mussel.ucc.gu.uwa.edu.au [130.95.13.18]) by mooneye.ucc.gu.uwa.edu.au (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5747D17DFA for ; Mon, 15 Aug 2005 21:53:19 +0800 (WST) Received: from zanchey by mussel.ucc.gu.uwa.edu.au with local (Exim 3.36 #1 (Debian)) id 1E4fOx-00045y-00 for ; Mon, 15 Aug 2005 21:53:19 +0800 Message-Id: Date: Mon, 15 Aug 2005 21:53:19 +0800 From: To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 Cc: Subject: docs/84951: [patch] Linux Comparison Article fixes X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: zanchey@ucc.gu.uwa.edu.au List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 15 Aug 2005 14:00:39 -0000 >Number: 84951 >Category: docs >Synopsis: [patch] Linux Comparison Article fixes >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: medium >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Mon Aug 15 14:00:37 GMT 2005 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: David Adam >Release: FreeBSD Documentation >Organization: University Computer Club, UWA >Environment: System: Linux mussel 2.6.10-1-686-smp #1 SMP Fri Mar 11 01:49:45 EST 2005 i686 GNU/Linux Architecture: i686 >Description: Dru's (excellent) article contains a couple of small grammatical mistakes I would like to see fixed. >How-To-Repeat: - Use of numbers instead of words to indicate the volume of open-source projects. - List of ways of finding commercial support vendors doesn't read quite right, IMO. >Fix: See patch below: --- linux-comparison-article.sgml.01.diff begins here --- Index: article.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/linux-comparison/article.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.5 diff -u -r1.5 article.sgml --- article.sgml 8 Aug 2005 22:08:06 -0000 1.5 +++ article.sgml 15 Aug 2005 13:37:44 -0000 @@ -345,7 +345,7 @@ One of the problems associated with Open Source software is the sheer volume of available applications. There - are literally 10s of 1000s of Open Source application projects + are literally tens of thousands of Open Source application projects each with varying levels of responsiveness to security incidents. FreeBSD has met this challenge head-on with VuXML. All software @@ -445,7 +445,7 @@ site: - FreeBSDMall has been selling support contracts + FreeBSDMall, who have been selling support contracts for nearly 10 years. --- linux-comparison-article.sgml.01.diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: