From owner-freebsd-doc Sat Jun 15 14:21:17 2002 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from smtp2.surewest.net (smtp2.surewest.net [208.45.228.17]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with SMTP id 7F89337B410 for ; Sat, 15 Jun 2002 14:21:15 -0700 (PDT) Received: (qmail 32552 invoked from network); 15 Jun 2002 21:21:15 -0000 Received: from unknown (HELO amd) (63.108.147.28) by smtp2.surewest.net with SMTP; 15 Jun 2002 21:21:15 -0000 Message-ID: <000501c214b2$9be6e5d0$0601a8c0@amd> From: "Bruce Newland" To: Subject: Error on doc web page Date: Sat, 15 Jun 2002 14:21:26 -0700 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="iso-8859-1" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Priority: 3 X-MSMail-Priority: Normal X-Mailer: Microsoft Outlook Express 6.00.2600.0000 X-MimeOLE: Produced By Microsoft MimeOLE V6.00.2600.0000 X-TST: SMTP2 SNWK Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org Morning guys, Just happened to notice a error in grammar here: http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/releng/article.html#vers ionbump The last sentence doesn't quite make sense. Is there supposed to be a "more" at the location I marked with *? and a "than" at the second *? 6 Future Directions It is imperative for our release engineering activities to scale with our growing userbase. Along these lines we are working very hard to document the procedures involved in producing FreeBSD releases. Parallelism - Certain portions of the release build are actually ``embarrassingly parallel''. Most of the tasks are very I/O intensive, so multiple high-speed disk drives is actually * important that*(than)? multiple processors in speeding up the ``make release'' process. Thanks for such a great product. Bruce Newland Service Quality Manager, EarthLink To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message