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Author: emaste (src committer)
Date: Thu Apr 14 18:53:26 2016
New Revision: 48636
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/48636

Log:
  Reword an awkward couple of sentences in the elftoolchain report

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-01-2016-03.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-01-2016-03.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-01-2016-03.xml	Thu Apr 14 18:19:07 2016	(r48635)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-01-2016-03.xml	Thu Apr 14 18:53:26 2016	(r48636)
@@ -1259,10 +1259,11 @@
 
       <p>The ELF Tool Chain project released version 0.7.1 in
 	February.  We have been tracking snapshots of the upstream
-	repository in &os; and are not blocked waiting for releases to
-	update.  Having an official release brings the benefit of
+	repository in &os;.
+	Having an official release brings the benefit of
 	broader testing and visibility within other open source
-	projects.</p>
+	projects, even if we do not require it in order to
+	update &os;.</p>
 
       <p>In the first quarter of 2016 The ELF Tool Chain tools were
 	updated to a snapshot of upstream SVN revision 3400, which