From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Thu Aug 18 00:20:08 2011 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1DD65106566C for ; Thu, 18 Aug 2011 00:20:08 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::28]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D77888FC0A for ; Thu, 18 Aug 2011 00:20:07 +0000 (UTC) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4) with ESMTP id p7I0K71f078165 for ; Thu, 18 Aug 2011 00:20:07 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4/Submit) id p7I0K77d078164; Thu, 18 Aug 2011 00:20:07 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Thu, 18 Aug 2011 00:20:07 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <201108180020.p7I0K77d078164@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, Ben Kaduk Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id B0873106566C for ; Thu, 18 Aug 2011 00:13:19 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from nobody@FreeBSD.org) Received: from red.freebsd.org (red.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::22]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A18708FC13 for ; Thu, 18 Aug 2011 00:13:19 +0000 (UTC) Received: from red.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by red.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4) with ESMTP id p7I0DJxv084163 for ; Thu, 18 Aug 2011 00:13:19 GMT (envelope-from nobody@red.freebsd.org) Received: (from nobody@localhost) by red.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4/Submit) id p7I0DJgD084157; Thu, 18 Aug 2011 00:13:19 GMT (envelope-from nobody) Message-Id: <201108180013.p7I0DJgD084157@red.freebsd.org> Date: Thu, 18 Aug 2011 00:13:19 GMT From: Ben Kaduk To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: www-3.1 Cc: Subject: docs/159854: grammar updates for carp.4 X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 18 Aug 2011 00:20:08 -0000 >Number: 159854 >Category: docs >Synopsis: grammar updates for carp.4 >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Thu Aug 18 00:20:07 UTC 2011 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Ben Kaduk >Release: 9-current >Organization: MIT SIPB >Environment: n/a >Description: Some grammar fixups for carp.4 (also a piece of markup). There was also a long line and trailing whitespace in one spot, so I have a separate whitespace.diff.txt to be applied prior to the main diff. I only get one attachment in the webform, so the second diff will come in as a reply to the ticket. >How-To-Repeat: man 4 carp >Fix: Patch attached with submission follows: --- carp.4.orig 2011-08-17 14:12:08.000000000 -0400 +++ carp.4.whitespace 2011-08-17 14:13:19.000000000 -0400 @@ -38,7 +38,8 @@ .Nm interface is a pseudo-device that implements and controls the CARP protocol. -CARP allows multiple hosts on the same local network to share a set of IP addresses. +CARP allows multiple hosts on the same local +network to share a set of IP addresses. Its primary purpose is to ensure that these addresses are always available, but in some configurations .Nm @@ -184,7 +185,7 @@ event. Please see .Xr devd.conf 5 -and +and .Sx EXAMPLES section for more information. .Sh EXAMPLES >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: