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Date:      Sat, 25 Jun 2022 12:31:47 +0000
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Subject:   [Bug 264851] Chapter 14.2.4 - Difficult to understand or typo
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Graham Perrin <grahamperrin@gmail.com> changed:

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--- Comment #3 from Graham Perrin <grahamperrin@gmail.com> ---
(In reply to kodcode from comment #0)

> 14.2.4

<https://docs.freebsd.org/en/books/handbook/book/#security-pwpolicy>; |
<https://docs.freebsd.org/en/books/handbook/security/#security-pwpolicy>;

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> =E2=80=A6 using built-in Pluggable Authentication Modules (PAM). =E2=80=A6

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> =E2=80=A6 using pluggable authentication modules (PAMs). =E2=80=A6

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> =E2=80=A6 the pam_passwdqc.so module. This module is enforced when a user=
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> changes their password. =E2=80=A6

Instead:=20

> =E2=80=A6 the pam_passwdqc.so module, which is enforced when a user=20
> changes their password.=20
>=20
> pam_passwdqc(8) describes five classes of character, and other aspects of=
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> password quality control. =E2=80=A6

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> This example sets several requirements for new passwords. The min setting=
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> controls the minimum password length. It has five values because this=20
> module defines five different types of passwords based on their=20
> complexity. Complexity is defined by the type of characters that must=20
> exist in a password, such as letters, numbers, symbols, and case. The=20
> types of passwords are described in pam_passwdqc(8). In this example,=20
> the first three types of passwords are disabled, meaning that passwords=20
> that meet those complexity requirements will not be accepted, regardless=
=20
> of their length. The 12 sets a minimum password policy of at least=20
> twelve characters, if the password also contains characters with=20
> three types of complexity. The 10 sets the password policy to also allow=
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> passwords of at least ten characters, if the password contains characters=
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> with four types of complexity.

Too verbose, IMHO. Instead:=20

> In the example above:=20
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> * min sets values for types N0, N1, N2, N3 and N4
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> * types N0, N1 and N2 are disallowed
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> * if three classes of character (N3) are used, then the word length must=
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>   be at least 12
>=20
> * if four classes (N4) are used, then the word length must be at least 10=
.=20

=E2=80=93 something like that.=20

The reader is directed, _before_ the example, to see the manual page that
describes the N types.

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