Date: Sun, 27 Jan 2013 12:51:03 +0000 (UTC) From: Eitan Adler <eadler@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r40759 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/snapshots Message-ID: <201301271251.r0RCp3N3036412@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: eadler Date: Sun Jan 27 12:51:03 2013 New Revision: 40759 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/40759 Log: Minor word niggles on the snapshot page: - if something is obvious, don't say it - use &os; - people don't really use netnews - don't discourage bug submissions about documentation Approved by: bcr (mentor) Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/snapshots/index.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/snapshots/index.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/snapshots/index.xml Sun Jan 27 01:45:15 2013 (r40758) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/snapshots/index.xml Sun Jan 27 12:51:03 2013 (r40759) @@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ These are <em>not</em> releases, these are <em>snapshots</em>, and it is important that this distinction be preserved. Although people can and will, of course, refer to snapshots - by date in mail or netnews, do not confuse them.</li> + by date in email, do not confuse them.</li> <li>Snapshots might not include package sets, but will generally include a ports tree.</li> @@ -78,12 +78,12 @@ For example, <tt>README</tt> may still refer to a previous release. This is because that is much less important than getting the real bug fixes and new features out for testing. - Please do not send a bug report about the documentation.</li> + Please do not send a bug report about version numbers.</li> </ul> - <p>Your feedback on these snapshots is, of course, greatly welcome. + <p>Your feedback on these snapshots is greatly welcome. They are not just for our benefit - those who are coming to rely - on FreeBSD for mission critical applications should welcome + on &os; for mission critical applications should welcome a chance to get at more updated bits in a structured fashion. You can also use these snapshots as tangible evidence that your feedback is getting incorporated and that you (hopefully) will not have
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