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Author: blackend
Date: Tue Dec 31 16:52:41 2013
New Revision: 43414
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/43414

Log:
  - Replace some quotes with the correct tags and reword the sentence to
    begin with a cap.
  - Correctly tag a username;

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml	Tue Dec 31 16:24:13 2013	(r43413)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml	Tue Dec 31 16:52:41 2013	(r43414)
@@ -1477,8 +1477,8 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is
 	<para>Use a unique label on every filesystem to avoid
 	  conflicts from identical labels.  A few letters from the
 	  computer's name, use, or location can be added to the label.
-	  "labroot" or "rootfs-lab" for the UFS root partition on the
-	  lab's computer, for example.</para>
+	  For instance, <literal>labroot</literal> or <literal>rootfs-lab</literal> for the UFS root partition on the
+	  lab's computer.</para>
       </tip>
 
       <example xml:id="bsdinstall-part-manual-splitfs">
@@ -2736,7 +2736,7 @@ login:</screen>
       <itemizedlist>
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>To gain access to the system, authentication is
-	    required.  The username is <literal>root</literal>, and
+	    required.  The username is <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>, and
 	    the password is blank.</para>
 	</listitem>