From owner-svn-doc-head@FreeBSD.ORG Fri Mar 15 17:49:27 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5160D99E; Fri, 15 Mar 2013 17:49:27 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from eadler@FreeBSD.org) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 29B0B140; Fri, 15 Mar 2013 17:49:27 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.6/8.14.6) with ESMTP id r2FHnQCs006713; Fri, 15 Mar 2013 17:49:26 GMT (envelope-from eadler@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from eadler@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.6/8.14.5/Submit) id r2FHnQrh006712; Fri, 15 Mar 2013 17:49:26 GMT (envelope-from eadler@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201303151749.r2FHnQrh006712@svn.freebsd.org> From: Eitan Adler Date: Fri, 15 Mar 2013 17:49:26 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r41234 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for the doc tree for head List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 15 Mar 2013 17:49:27 -0000 Author: eadler Date: Fri Mar 15 17:49:26 2013 New Revision: 41234 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41234 Log: Remove duplicate text from the introduction and move it into the abstract. Simplify some of the text from both sections. Reviewed by: doc Approved by: jkois (mentor) Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml Fri Mar 15 16:49:52 2013 (r41233) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml Fri Mar 15 17:49:26 2013 (r41234) @@ -71,39 +71,26 @@ $FreeBSD$ - This is the FAQ for &os; versions - &rel2.relx; and &rel.relx;. - If you are interested in helping with - this project, send email to the &a.doc;. The latest version of + This is the FAQ for &os; versions &rel2.relx; and + &rel.relx;. Every effort has been made to make this FAQ as + informative as possible; if you have any suggestions as to how + it may be improved, please feel free to mail them to the + &a.doc;. + + The latest version of this document is always available from the &os; website. It may also be downloaded as one large HTML file with HTTP or as a variety of other formats from the &os; FTP - server. You may also want to Search the FAQ. + server. Introduction - Welcome to the &os; - &rel2.relx; - and &rel.relx; - - FAQ! - - As is usual with Usenet FAQs, this document aims to cover the - most frequently asked questions concerning the &os; operating - system (and of course answer them!). Although originally intended - to reduce bandwidth and avoid the same old questions being asked - over and over again, FAQs have become recognized as valuable - information resources. - - Every effort has been made to make this FAQ as informative as - possible; if you have any suggestions as to how it may be - improved, please feel free to mail them to the &a.doc;. -