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Date:      Mon, 4 Jun 2012 16:18:30 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org>
To:        doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r38983 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config
Message-ID:  <201206041618.q54GIUhT051959@svn.freebsd.org>

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Author: bcr
Date: Mon Jun  4 16:18:30 2012
New Revision: 38983
URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/38983

Log:
  Fix a comma splice by making two separate (shorter) sentences out of
  a long one.
  
  Submitted by:	bjk

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml	Mon Jun  4 16:08:25 2012	(r38982)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml	Mon Jun  4 16:18:30 2012	(r38983)
@@ -1435,7 +1435,7 @@ ifconfig_fxp0_alias7="inet 202.0.75.20 n
 
     <para>System logging is an important aspect of system
       administration.  It is used both to detect hardware and software
-      issues and errors in the system, it also plays a very
+      issues and errors in the system.  It also plays a very
       important role in security auditing and incident response.
       System daemons without a controlling terminal also usually log
       information to a system logging facility or other log



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