From nobody Sun Jun 26 19:25:06 2022 X-Original-To: doc@mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5ACE7868B9E for ; Sun, 26 Jun 2022 19:25:06 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: from mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:3]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256 client-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) client-digest SHA256) (Client CN "mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org", Issuer "R3" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4LWLR60wp1z4q7R for ; Sun, 26 Jun 2022 19:25:06 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: from kenobi.freebsd.org (kenobi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::50:1d]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256) (Client did not present a certificate) by mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id F1EF419E25 for ; Sun, 26 Jun 2022 19:25:05 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: from kenobi.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.5]) by kenobi.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id 25QJP5jF076542 for ; Sun, 26 Jun 2022 19:25:05 GMT (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: (from www@localhost) by kenobi.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id 25QJP5PV076541 for doc@FreeBSD.org; Sun, 26 Jun 2022 19:25:05 GMT (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) X-Authentication-Warning: kenobi.freebsd.org: www set sender to bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org using -f From: bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org To: doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: [Bug 264892] Handbook 14.3.3 Grammar fix Date: Sun, 26 Jun 2022 19:25:06 +0000 X-Bugzilla-Reason: AssignedTo X-Bugzilla-Type: changed X-Bugzilla-Watch-Reason: None X-Bugzilla-Product: Documentation X-Bugzilla-Component: Books & Articles X-Bugzilla-Version: Latest X-Bugzilla-Keywords: X-Bugzilla-Severity: Affects Some People X-Bugzilla-Who: grahamperrin@gmail.com X-Bugzilla-Status: New X-Bugzilla-Resolution: X-Bugzilla-Priority: --- X-Bugzilla-Assigned-To: doc@FreeBSD.org X-Bugzilla-Flags: X-Bugzilla-Changed-Fields: cc Message-ID: In-Reply-To: References: Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-Bugzilla-URL: https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/ Auto-Submitted: auto-generated List-Id: Documentation project List-Archive: https://lists.freebsd.org/archives/freebsd-doc List-Help: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@freebsd.org MIME-Version: 1.0 ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=freebsd.org; s=dkim; t=1656271506; h=from:from:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date:message-id:message-id: to:to:cc:mime-version:mime-version:content-type:content-type: content-transfer-encoding:content-transfer-encoding: in-reply-to:in-reply-to:references:references; bh=kM2jk1IDwzIqvjbWhD5b5RYjLY930hwFGzJZtxZoa58=; b=ZIRr7Qe2L+C8LIu90eSAHA7vH+fPa4qPhu/j66JGs7sz3reVYKGcUDDwFTQpIdyEBIT/Ju zTzsEHJOMevH4bJHx0UN3pw4WbO7L8FTDoEJOx2jh17WYHds5B4ZxFF9BA5fPVnlsga0Lq oATeH6UQSTAlp/KkMi++pqaoKT7zZwt5a7HWdKWHcc39lf4Voo5iCVm/a5nRpfnqyt+Glu DVd4OvVda35Cp+S1HCimq1sd+QwjdiiMmyMUgjJsqVUayvQgRRxG2jQ/wc8UPXnGRRlusU kvP0pglConcbFQKZ/r3cGoICsgNBQ63XpiIJmtuxzqS+vhxK/Z5NrBnjqxDcqw== ARC-Seal: i=1; s=dkim; d=freebsd.org; t=1656271506; a=rsa-sha256; cv=none; b=tj10wJ5Nn0ZZbjYPjjmhEk0x+vi7bgI9E2kmdUYpA8VZVtWfq2eoaUXwlwpn8D3POi+pHY /f4vZ/PKQOFXpKDMH1QIfcLaPvZNO2faoBQKY8Bd4SUPyXfUxGFCg0QmTtGdp426iNSOlj PSRixs5p+Df3TBAFOIm2W2vMYnL6N9pw/WYVXxwoTt1BVo6HKZsl43BgpfhNruY4AjGG5x BcqVK3PkhQyzdUz5/6pjYxsTjNsGGejurFTQy4HmvUmlt4oKHKUEsFyCzbRJyAaR1WOofG RWpn21EYENUB8SifBl+UEhuuh/utyKpzy9gT9XBvF3yl/M9+YZrZbP6kkL86jQ== ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; mx1.freebsd.org; none X-ThisMailContainsUnwantedMimeParts: N https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=3D264892 Graham Perrin changed: What |Removed |Added ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- CC| |grahamperrin@gmail.com --- Comment #1 from Graham Perrin --- (In reply to kodcode from comment #0) Beginning at (currently 14.3) =E2=80=A6 If I understand correctly: OPIE is, or can be, a series of prompts; plural.= =20 So, instead, maybe:=20 > The OPIE prompts provide a useful feature. Although honestly, it's the type of sentence that I'd simply remove.=20 (Like, everything in a handbook is, or should be, implicitly useful.) --=20 You are receiving this mail because: You are the assignee for the bug.=