From owner-freebsd-bugs Thu Nov 21 5:40: 5 2002 Delivered-To: freebsd-bugs@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7792537B401 for ; Thu, 21 Nov 2002 05:40:04 -0800 (PST) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [216.136.204.21]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 33F1C43E4A for ; Thu, 21 Nov 2002 05:40:04 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.12.6/8.12.6) with ESMTP id gALDe4x3036543 for ; Thu, 21 Nov 2002 05:40:04 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.12.6/8.12.6/Submit) id gALDe4bR036542; Thu, 21 Nov 2002 05:40:04 -0800 (PST) Date: Thu, 21 Nov 2002 05:40:04 -0800 (PST) Message-Id: <200211211340.gALDe4bR036542@freefall.freebsd.org> To: freebsd-bugs@FreeBSD.org Cc: From: Giorgos Keramidas Subject: Re: misc/45493: Confusing comment in /etc/crontab Reply-To: Giorgos Keramidas Sender: owner-freebsd-bugs@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org The following reply was made to PR misc/45493; it has been noted by GNATS. From: Giorgos Keramidas To: Ceri Davies , Tom Hukins Cc: bug-followup@freebsd.org Subject: Re: misc/45493: Confusing comment in /etc/crontab Date: Thu, 21 Nov 2002 15:30:58 +0200 On 2002-11-21 05:20, Ceri Davies wrote: > On Thu, Nov 21, 2002 at 05:10:05AM -0800, Tom Hukins wrote: > > Yes, on reflection "Adjust the time zone only if the CMOS clock keeps > > local time. See adjkerntz(8) for details." seems clearer to me. > > What other time does it keep? ;) UTC obviously. > "Adjust the time zone only if local time is kept by the CMOS clock" ? This is equivalent to the one Tom suggested. It doesn't add or remove anything to the meaning. It also uses a passive form that is sometimes considered to be bad style :p If the comment needs to describe two cases, there should be two simpler sentences instead of one that doesn't quite cut it. I'd probably prefer this written as: # Adjust the time zone. See adjkerntz(8) for details. If your CMOS # clock is set to UTC instead of the local time, this does nothing. To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-bugs" in the body of the message