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Date: Mon, 20 Jan 2003 13:52:16 +0200
From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@ceid.upatras.gr>
To: Ceri Davies <setantae@submonkey.net>
Cc: doc@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: dmesg
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On 2003-01-19 17:09, Ceri Davies <setantae@submonkey.net> wrote:
> Index: multimedia/chapter.sgml
> ===================================================================
> RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.sgml,v
> retrieving revision 1.46
> diff -u -r1.46 chapter.sgml
> --- multimedia/chapter.sgml	4 Dec 2002 02:48:45 -0000	1.46
> +++ multimedia/chapter.sgml	19 Jan 2003 17:07:12 -0000
> @@ -291,10 +291,10 @@
>      <title>Creating and Testing the Device Nodes</title>
>
>      <indexterm><primary>device nodes</primary></indexterm>
> -    <para>After you reboot, log in and run <command>dmesg | grep
> -      pcm</command> as shown below:</para>
> +    <para>After you reboot, log in and run <command>grep
> +      pcm /var/run/dmesg.boot</command> as shown below:</para>
>
> -    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>dmesg | grep pcm</userinput>
> +    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>grep pcm /var/run/dmesg.boot</userinput>
>  pcm0: &lt;SB16 DSP 4.11&gt; on sbc0</screen>

There is an unnecessary duplication of the command here.  Perhaps
something like:

	<para>After you reboot, log in and check the
	  <filename>/var/run/dmesg.boot</filename> file as shown
	  below:</para>

	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>grep pcm /var/run/dmesg.boot</userinput>
	  pcm0: &lt;SB16 DSP 4.11&gt; on sbc0</screen>

Everything else looks fine :)


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