From owner-svn-doc-head@FreeBSD.ORG Fri Mar 15 18:56:35 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.FreeBSD.org [8.8.178.115]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E59D117C; Fri, 15 Mar 2013 18:56:35 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kaduk@mit.edu) Received: from dmz-mailsec-scanner-1.mit.edu (DMZ-MAILSEC-SCANNER-1.MIT.EDU [18.9.25.12]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 29FB986F; Fri, 15 Mar 2013 18:56:34 +0000 (UTC) X-AuditID: 1209190c-b7f046d00000094c-01-51436db07e25 Received: from mailhub-auth-1.mit.edu ( [18.9.21.35]) by dmz-mailsec-scanner-1.mit.edu (Symantec Messaging Gateway) with SMTP id F7.7D.02380.0BD63415; Fri, 15 Mar 2013 14:51:28 -0400 (EDT) Received: from outgoing.mit.edu (OUTGOING-AUTH-1.MIT.EDU [18.9.28.11]) by mailhub-auth-1.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.9.2) with ESMTP id r2FIpRlD008200; Fri, 15 Mar 2013 14:51:27 -0400 Received: from multics.mit.edu (SYSTEM-LOW-SIPB.MIT.EDU [18.187.2.37]) (authenticated bits=56) (User authenticated as kaduk@ATHENA.MIT.EDU) by outgoing.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.12.4) with ESMTP id r2FIpPti009771 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NOT); Fri, 15 Mar 2013 14:51:26 -0400 Received: (from kaduk@localhost) by multics.mit.edu (8.12.9.20060308) id r2FIpONb001177; Fri, 15 Mar 2013 14:51:24 -0400 (EDT) Date: Fri, 15 Mar 2013 14:51:23 -0400 (EDT) From: Benjamin Kaduk To: Eitan Adler Subject: Re: svn commit: r41234 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq In-Reply-To: <201303151749.r2FHnQrh006712@svn.freebsd.org> Message-ID: References: <201303151749.r2FHnQrh006712@svn.freebsd.org> User-Agent: Alpine 1.10 (GSO 962 2008-03-14) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; charset=US-ASCII; format=flowed X-Brightmail-Tracker: H4sIAAAAAAAAA+NgFvrAIsWRmVeSWpSXmKPExsUixCmqrLsh1znQ4Ewrh8WPj4eYLHb9ncNs cWPRfiaL3f29zA4sHjM+zWcJYIzisklJzcksSy3St0vgyrh/+gdjwW2Winun6hoYHzJ3MXJy SAiYSDztbISyxSQu3FvP1sXIxSEksI9RYv+HbcwQzkZGiSNHf7BDOIeYJFYv3M4C4TQAZeaf YgPpZxHQltj65CXYLDYBFYmZbzaCxUWA7O/7fzKB2MwCURJ7ljaygtjCAg4S288tAxrEwcEp YCVx7Y89SJgXKLxpUw8rSFhIwFJi/XU1kLCogI7E6v1TWCBKBCVOznzCAjHRUuLcn+tsExgF ZyFJzUKSWsDItIpRNiW3Sjc3MTOnODVZtzg5MS8vtUjXUC83s0QvNaV0EyM4YCV5djC+Oah0 iFGAg1GJh7fR1TlQiDWxrLgy9xCjJAeTkihveQ5QiC8pP6UyI7E4I76oNCe1+BCjBAezkgjv O32gHG9KYmVValE+TEqag0VJnPdyyk1/IYH0xJLU7NTUgtQimKwMB4eSBK83yFDBotT01Iq0 zJwShDQTByfIcB6g4RNBaniLCxJzizPTIfKnGBWlxHkzQBICIImM0jy4XlhCecUoDvSKMG8u SBUPMBnBdb8CGswENHjfFSeQwSWJCCmpBsaps67Upxyc+m2+5aXP+mKaly9EHGROmxxgoVkS ezXSaSNP16WZZQdZdp/s/eljtH3KPfm9uvK8QhoWkRIvm6dye8Q862dZWhczxzThUulh/zMH Ul/cuSLhL7pJUU71mlCjXsyxJJ7orxNEj0p/K/ixxNNNpEw9dMoJj+DEqA6jDac0ZFlL3JVY ijMSDbWYi4oTAXldTI4DAwAA Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for the doc tree for head List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 15 Mar 2013 18:56:36 -0000 On Fri, 15 Mar 2013, Eitan Adler wrote: > Author: eadler > Date: Fri Mar 15 17:49:26 2013 > New Revision: 41234 > URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41234 > > Log: > Remove duplicate text from the introduction and move it into the > abstract. Simplify some of the text from both sections. > > Reviewed by: doc It was "silence on -doc", unless http://lists.freebsd.org/pipermail/freebsd-doc/2013-March/021639.html saw some reply that is not appearing... (I looked at the patch but did not have particular thoughts about it.) -Ben > Approved by: jkois (mentor)