From owner-svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Mon Jan 25 21:32:46 2016 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-head@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3B69CA45119; Mon, 25 Jan 2016 21:32:46 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from wblock@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org (repo.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:6068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 181CBE20; Mon, 25 Jan 2016 21:32:46 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from wblock@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.37]) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id u0PLWjku047228; Mon, 25 Jan 2016 21:32:45 GMT (envelope-from wblock@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from wblock@localhost) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id u0PLWj58047227; Mon, 25 Jan 2016 21:32:45 GMT (envelope-from wblock@FreeBSD.org) Message-Id: <201601252132.u0PLWj58047227@repo.freebsd.org> X-Authentication-Warning: repo.freebsd.org: wblock set sender to wblock@FreeBSD.org using -f From: Warren Block Date: Mon, 25 Jan 2016 21:32:45 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r48094 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.20 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for the doc tree for head List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 25 Jan 2016 21:32:46 -0000 Author: wblock Date: Mon Jan 25 21:32:44 2016 New Revision: 48094 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/48094 Log: Add some inexplicably missing words and reword a few sentences for clarity. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing/chapter.xml Mon Jan 25 21:22:06 2016 (r48093) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing/chapter.xml Mon Jan 25 21:32:44 2016 (r48094) @@ -118,11 +118,11 @@ Starting lpd. Printers are connected to computer systems in a variety of ways. Small desktop printers are usually connected directly to - computer's USB port. Older printers are + a computer's USB port. Older printers are connected to a parallel or printer port. Some printers are directly connected to a network, making it easy for - multiple computers share them. A few printers use a much less - common serial port connection. + multiple computers to share them. A few printers use a rare + serial port connection. &os; can communicate with all of these types of printers. @@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ Starting lpd. job, ulpt0 resets the USB port. Resetting the port can cause problems with some printers, so the - unlpt0 device is used instead. + unlpt0 device is usually used instead. unlpt0 does not reset the USB port at all. @@ -187,9 +187,9 @@ Starting lpd. Several communication parameters must be known to communicate with a serial printer. The most important are - baud rate and + baud rate or BPS (Bits Per Second) and parity. Values vary, but typical - serial printers often use a baud rate of 9600 and no + serial printers use a baud rate of 9600 and no parity. @@ -1042,8 +1042,8 @@ lp: All of the documents print on that single printer. When the Sales department grows enough to need their own printer, - the alias is removed from the shared printer entry and used - as the name of the new printer. Users in both departments + the alias can be removed from the shared printer entry and used + as the name of a new printer. Users in both departments continue to use the same commands, but the Sales documents are sent to the new printer. @@ -1051,7 +1051,7 @@ lp: Header Pages - Users can have difficulty locating their documents in + It can be difficult for users to locate their documents in the stack of pages produced by a busy shared printer. Header pages were created to solve this problem. A header page with the user name and document name @@ -1062,7 +1062,7 @@ lp: Enabling header pages differs depending on whether the printer is connected directly to the computer with a USB, parallel, or serial cable, or - is connected remotely by the network. + is connected remotely over a network. Header pages on directly-connected printers are enabled by removing the :sh:\ (Suppress Header)