From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Jun 14 21:41:06 2004 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2165516A4CE for ; Mon, 14 Jun 2004 21:41:06 +0000 (GMT) Received: from web51010.mail.yahoo.com (web51010.mail.yahoo.com [206.190.39.129]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with SMTP id BC6F743D1D for ; Mon, 14 Jun 2004 21:41:05 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from matthew_mcgraw@yahoo.com) Message-ID: <20040614214105.71339.qmail@web51010.mail.yahoo.com> Received: from [12.110.52.132] by web51010.mail.yahoo.com via HTTP; Mon, 14 Jun 2004 14:41:05 PDT Date: Mon, 14 Jun 2004 14:41:05 -0700 (PDT) From: Matthew McGraw To: fbsd_user@a1poweruser.com MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii X-Content-Filtered-By: Mailman/MimeDel 2.1.1 cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: re: firewall section of handbook X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 14 Jun 2004 21:41:06 -0000 hey joe, matthew here from the freebsd-doc list. i have reviewed your firewall section and i must say that your content is excellent. i am a relativly new fbsd user myself, and i got much out of your document. kudos to you. i have volunteered my services as an editor/proofreader to the group so i read your docs with that in mind. attached to this email, please find a word (.doc) document reflecting some edits to your work. i colored my changes/edits and tried to include comments in italics so you could understand where i was coming from. i hope this is seen as helpful and not as an insult to your work. as i said before, your content is top-notch. my suggestions are only to improve readability/grammar. thanks, matthew mcgraw Matthew McGraw 702.860.7013 --------------------------------- Do you Yahoo!? Friends. Fun. Try the all-new Yahoo! Messenger