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From: Brad Davis <brd@FreeBSD.org>
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brd         2006-04-19 08:27:24 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/hubs article.sgml 
  Log:
  - Clean up wording about FTP servers and web servers.
  - <application>ify.
  - Add missing "this".
  - Remove a few occurrences of "probably".
  - Fix a link to the FDP Primer and remove some incorrect notes that should have been comments.
  - Correct that public CVS mirrors should sync once an hour.
  - Fix various grammar nits.
  - Remove a note about needing to use make(1) to build the website.
  
  Approved by:    ceri@
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.56      +29 -34    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/hubs/article.sgml