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From: Nik Clayton <nik@FreeBSD.org>
To: Mario Sergio Fujikawa Ferreira <lioux@FreeBSD.org>
Cc: FreeBSD-doc@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: (review plz) Documenting MASTER_SITES:n code
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On Sun, Dec 08, 2002 at 09:49:12PM -0200, Mario Sergio Fujikawa Ferreira wr=
ote:
> 	That was the previous documentation. :) I've just finished
> writing a thourough documentation for MASTER_SITES:n feature.

[...]

> http://people.freebsd.org/~lioux/book.html.gz#PORTING-MASTER-SITES-N

Thanks for the updates.

Having read that, I'd tack your new section 4.4.7.2 ("Detailed
information") on to the end of the existing section. =20

IMHO the replacement for the main body of 4.4.7 doesn't add to the=20
original text, and in the replacement text I'd prefer to see fewer=20
informal phrases ("explain in HUGE scary detail") which we've been=20
slowly excising from the Handbook.

I haven't had a chance to look over the actual markup yet.

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