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Author: dru
Date: Sun Jul 26 12:48:37 2015
New Revision: 47099
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47099

Log:
  Further improvements to paragraph.
  
  Reviewed by: wblock
  Sponsored by: Essen DevSummit Hackathon

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml	Sun Jul 26 10:23:02 2015	(r47098)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml	Sun Jul 26 12:48:37 2015	(r47099)
@@ -1144,15 +1144,11 @@
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