From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Thu Aug 18 00:21:57 2011 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id BDF84106566B for ; Thu, 18 Aug 2011 00:21:57 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kaduk@mit.edu) Received: from dmz-mailsec-scanner-5.mit.edu (DMZ-MAILSEC-SCANNER-5.MIT.EDU [18.7.68.34]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 662398FC13 for ; Thu, 18 Aug 2011 00:21:57 +0000 (UTC) X-AuditID: 12074422-b7ba7ae000000a14-89-4e4c5b1d05c1 Received: from mailhub-auth-1.mit.edu ( [18.9.21.35]) by dmz-mailsec-scanner-5.mit.edu (Symantec Messaging Gateway) with SMTP id CB.76.02580.D1B5C4E4; Wed, 17 Aug 2011 20:21:49 -0400 (EDT) Received: from outgoing.mit.edu (OUTGOING-AUTH.MIT.EDU [18.7.22.103]) by mailhub-auth-1.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.9.2) with ESMTP id p7I0Lu6K024218 for ; Wed, 17 Aug 2011 20:21:56 -0400 Received: from multics.mit.edu (MULTICS.MIT.EDU [18.187.1.73]) (authenticated bits=56) (User authenticated as kaduk@ATHENA.MIT.EDU) by outgoing.mit.edu (8.13.6/8.12.4) with ESMTP id p7I0Ltdt017487 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NOT) for ; Wed, 17 Aug 2011 20:21:56 -0400 (EDT) Received: (from kaduk@localhost) by multics.mit.edu (8.12.9.20060308) id p7I0Ltkp007696; Wed, 17 Aug 2011 20:21:55 -0400 (EDT) Date: Wed, 17 Aug 2011 20:21:01 -0400 (EDT) From: Benjamin Kaduk To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org In-Reply-To: <201108180020.p7I0K7an078160@freefall.freebsd.org> Message-ID: References: <201108180020.p7I0K7an078160@freefall.freebsd.org> User-Agent: Alpine 1.10 (GSO 962 2008-03-14) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: MULTIPART/MIXED; BOUNDARY="-559023410-1428168044-1313626861=:7526" ReSent-Date: Wed, 17 Aug 2011 20:21:48 -0400 (EDT) ReSent-From: Benjamin Kaduk ReSent-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org ReSent-Subject: Re: docs/159854: grammar updates for carp.4 ReSent-Message-ID: ReSent-User-Agent: Alpine 1.10 (GSO 962 2008-03-14) 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