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From: Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org>
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To: simon@nitro.dk, murray@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/50790: [patch] Expand description of dumpdev use in
	Developers Handbook
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Synopsis: [patch] Expand description of dumpdev use in Developers Handbook

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State-Changed-By: murray
State-Changed-When: Sun May 4 20:40:03 PDT 2003
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I've committed an update to this paragraph that takes into account
your original change and Chris' improvement.  One thing to note is
that it doesn't look good to use the man page entities twice in close
proximity.  So I used &man.dumpon.8; the first time, then just used
<command>dumpon</command> elsewhere in the paragraph.

This chapter needs a lot of work, so if you can make any more
extensive grammar improvements throughout this chapter it would be
much appreciated.  Thanks.


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