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From: Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org>
To: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
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On Tue, May 27, 2003 at 12:58:04PM -0700, Tom Rhodes wrote:
>   Modified files:
>     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config chapter.sgml 
>   Log:
>   Add callouts to the cron(8) section.
>   Add some better descriptions.
>   Add more information where readers might be 'left in the dark.'

Hey Tom, thanks for adding the callouts.  Can you send this sort of
thing to doc@ or to jim@ first, please?  There are a lot of basic
grammar errors.

       - Murray