From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Wed Apr 1 11:23:45 2009 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2EF7E106566C; Wed, 1 Apr 2009 11:23:45 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from sonic2000gr@gmail.com) Received: from mail-fx0-f167.google.com (mail-fx0-f167.google.com [209.85.220.167]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 649C58FC12; Wed, 1 Apr 2009 11:23:44 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from sonic2000gr@gmail.com) Received: by fxm11 with SMTP id 11so2758910fxm.43 for ; Wed, 01 Apr 2009 04:23:43 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=domainkey-signature:received:received:message-id:date:from :user-agent:mime-version:to:cc:subject:references:in-reply-to :content-type:content-transfer-encoding; bh=EQwMjqXdANzE0n5A1KrRUF0yMcyljspN8LycABm/700=; b=Uaf+mAsNtIKSI6t0kXIIw5u5JH5/mgIZwTDRlLerDFW1HDss7hMCYT2QsVoVQoA8A+ zEojydDU7n+cKyNakiIdEUpuGWf2U3FEmqOI2kTNEO8Hl3AXfYbY6P326BPafF5zD0+J hrWHwZtRXL7NwgOkpliReD6Ird3QJgIy1Me84= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=message-id:date:from:user-agent:mime-version:to:cc:subject :references:in-reply-to:content-type:content-transfer-encoding; b=BANQY4I4fOz6bHhvZl1gO/sbrPFaBTZWcTpV3Zx2ZmxueX8+wsl1VvSGrxiybalsec gfJoyCDdq6oYA+2os+bTv71k9pKEXY5XV3ehCvZXnLkoAVGym846FP9FSvw1A5YNlhG4 tNIJmtS9ZXwJnHn8Rzc2r74Pg8nmu20+tanMY= Received: by 10.86.59.2 with SMTP id h2mr5933945fga.73.1238583199435; Wed, 01 Apr 2009 03:53:19 -0700 (PDT) Received: from atlantis.dyndns.org (athedsl-4491433.home.otenet.gr [94.71.84.177]) by mx.google.com with ESMTPS id e20sm6624354fga.29.2009.04.01.03.53.18 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=RC4-MD5); Wed, 01 Apr 2009 03:53:19 -0700 (PDT) Message-ID: <49D3479D.9010405@gmail.com> Date: Wed, 01 Apr 2009 13:53:17 +0300 From: Manolis Kiagias User-Agent: Thunderbird 2.0.0.21 (X11/20090330) MIME-Version: 1.0 To: Tom Rhodes References: <200904010900.n31906NT046593@freefall.freebsd.org> In-Reply-To: <200904010900.n31906NT046593@freefall.freebsd.org> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-7 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/131568: Cleanup for ipf documentation X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 01 Apr 2009 11:23:45 -0000 Tom Rhodes wrote: > The following reply was made to PR docs/131568; it has been noted by GNATS. > > From: Tom Rhodes > To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org > Cc: pepper@cbio.mskcc.org > Subject: Re: docs/131568: Cleanup for ipf documentation > Date: Wed, 1 Apr 2009 04:12:42 -0400 > > Hi Chris, > > I'm trying to compare your fixed version to the current one. Could > you perhaps generate a unified diff against the SGML files? It > would be much easier for us to parse. Thanks! > > BTW: The primer can be found at this URL: > http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/index.html > > -- > Tom Rhodes > I am also in the process of finishing (hopefully) a long patch for the 'firewalls' chapter that attempts to fix some of these inconsistencies (and many others). While it is not exactly at review state yet, here is what I got right now: http://people.freebsd.org/~manolis/firewalls.diff (this is still changing, but comments are welcome nonetheless) and a build is here: http://www.freebsdgr.org/handbook-mine/firewalls.html I originally missed this PR, but I could have a look at the submitted text and integrate it with this patch, if appropriate. Cheers, manolis@