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From: Tom Rhodes <darklogik@pittgoth.com>
Subject: Re: docs/35683: [PATCH] Fix amd info
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The following reply was made to PR docs/35683; it has been noted by GNATS.

From: Tom Rhodes <darklogik@pittgoth.com>
To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/35683: [PATCH] Fix amd info
Date: Sat, 9 Mar 2002 11:43:56 -0500 (EST)

 I like your suggestion Udo, I killed the nitpick word "the" and
 did a little more than just that.  This patch is a tad bit larger,
 and I would either like some comments or a commit.  I did not like
 the use of the word "access" 3 times in one sentence.  Here is a proposed
 rewording of that sentence, natd section.
 
 --
 Tom Rhodes
 
 diff -ru handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml handbook.new/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml
 --- handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml	Thu Mar  7 18:55:11 2002
 +++ handbook.new/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml	Sat Mar  9 11:37:19 2002
 @@ -988,13 +988,13 @@
        <indexterm><primary>automatic mounter daemon</primary></indexterm>
  
        <para>&man.amd.8; (the automatic mounter daemon)
 -	is a useful daemon that automatically mounts a
 +	automatically mounts a
  	remote filesystem whenever a file or directory within that
  	filesystem is accessed.  Filesystems that are inactive for a
  	period of time will also be automatically unmounted by
  	<application>amd</application>.  Using
  	<application>amd</application> provides a simple alternative
 -	to permanent mounts, as permanent mounts should be listed in the
 +	to permanent mounts, as permanent mounts are usually listed in
          <filename>/etc/fstab</filename>.</para>
  
        <para><application>amd</application> operates by attaching
 @@ -4796,7 +4796,7 @@
        <title>Setup</title>
        <para>Due to the diminishing IP space in IPv4, and the increased number
          of users on high-speed consumer lines such as cable or DSL, people are
 -        in more and more need of an Internet Connection Sharing solution.  The
 +        more in need of an Internet Connection Sharing solution.  The
          ability to connect several computers online through one connection and
          IP address makes &man.natd.8; a reasonable choice.</para>
  
 @@ -4831,9 +4831,9 @@
  	</textobject>
        </mediaobject>
  
 -      <para>With this setup, the machine without Internet access can use
 -        the machine with access as a gateway to access the outside 
 -        world.</para>
 +      <para>With a setup such as this, a machine not connected to the
 +        internet directly can still access the internet through
 +        the <acronym>LAN</acronym>.</para>
      </sect2>
  
      <sect2 id="configuration">

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