From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG  Sun Jan 13 06:02:31 2013
Return-Path: <owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG>
Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org
Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.FreeBSD.org [8.8.178.115])
 by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D97DA924;
 Sun, 13 Jan 2013 06:02:31 +0000 (UTC)
 (envelope-from eadler@FreeBSD.org)
Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org
 [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0])
 by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id C0AAF887;
 Sun, 13 Jan 2013 06:02:31 +0000 (UTC)
Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.FreeBSD.org [8.8.178.70])
 by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.5/8.14.5) with ESMTP id r0D62V1A028656;
 Sun, 13 Jan 2013 06:02:31 GMT (envelope-from eadler@svn.freebsd.org)
Received: (from eadler@localhost)
 by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.5/8.14.5/Submit) id r0D62Voo028655;
 Sun, 13 Jan 2013 06:02:31 GMT (envelope-from eadler@svn.freebsd.org)
Message-Id: <201301130602.r0D62Voo028655@svn.freebsd.org>
From: Eitan Adler <eadler@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Sun, 13 Jan 2013 06:02:31 +0000 (UTC)
To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org,
 svn-doc-head@freebsd.org
Subject: svn commit: r40600 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq
X-SVN-Group: doc-head
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit
X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14
Precedence: list
List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for &quot;
 user&quot; , &quot; projects&quot; , and &quot; translations&quot;
 \)" <svn-doc-all.freebsd.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/options/svn-doc-all>,
 <mailto:svn-doc-all-request@freebsd.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://lists.freebsd.org/pipermail/svn-doc-all>
List-Post: <mailto:svn-doc-all@freebsd.org>
List-Help: <mailto:svn-doc-all-request@freebsd.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/svn-doc-all>,
 <mailto:svn-doc-all-request@freebsd.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 13 Jan 2013 06:02:31 -0000

Author: eadler
Date: Sun Jan 13 06:02:31 2013
New Revision: 40600
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/40600

Log:
  Reduce and subtract extra words.
  
  Approved by:	bcr (mentor)

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Sun Jan 13 06:00:25 2013	(r40599)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Sun Jan 13 06:02:31 2013	(r40600)
@@ -6996,8 +6996,8 @@ deny pred1 deflate deflate24 protocomp a
 	    to see a hangup from the server.</para>
 
 	  <para>This can be avoided by allowing the peer to start
-	    negotiating with the following line in your
-	    <filename>ppp.conf</filename> file:</para>
+	    negotiating with the following line in
+	    <filename>ppp.conf</filename>:</para>
 
 	  <programlisting>set openmode passive</programlisting>
 
@@ -7103,8 +7103,8 @@ deny pred1 deflate deflate24 protocomp a
 	    appear to have frozen.  This is because &man.ppp.8; is
 	    waiting for the command to complete.</para>
 
-	  <para>If you wish to execute commands like this, use the
-	    <command>!bg</command> command instead.  This will execute
+	  <para>To execute commands like this, use
+	    <command>!bg</command> instead.  This will execute
 	    the given command in the background, and &man.ppp.8; can
 	    continue to service the link.</para>
 	</answer>