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Subject: Re: Typos in 5.3 Release Notes
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Eric van Gyzen <vangyzen@stat.duke.edu> wrote
  in <4185947A.9000802@stat.duke.edu>:

v> It's mostly corrections for punctuation and grammar, such as missing or 
v> extra commas and articles, tense or plurality disagreement between the 
v> subject and verb, et cetera.  Feel free to ask for justification or 
v> clarification.

 Thanks!  I will look into it and fix the relnotes soon.

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| Hiroki SATO

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