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>Number:         13465
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Fix typos in the Documentation Primer
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon Aug 30 04:30:00 PDT 1999
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Mark Ovens mark@ukug.uk.freebsd.org
>Release:        FreeBSD 3.1-RELEASE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:

	

>Description:

	Fix a couple of typos in section 4.2.4.2 of the Documentation
	Project Primer.

	A <title> tag is ended with </para>

	Also, just to be pedantic, although Nik is English the example
	text is from the US Constitution so "defence" should be "defense".

>How-To-Repeat:

	Read the FDP Primer

>Fix:
	

*** doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-markup/chapter.sgml.orig	Mon Aug 30 11:33:09 1999
--- doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-markup/chapter.sgml	Mon Aug 30 11:33:51 1999
***************
*** 978,990 ****
  <![ CDATA [<para>A small excerpt from the US Constitution;</para>
  	      
  <blockquote>
!   <title>Preamble to the Constitution of the United States</para>
  
    <attribution>Copied from a web site somewhere</attribution>
  	    
    <para>We the People of the United States, in Order to form a more perfect
      Union, establish Justice, insure domestic Tranquility, provide for the
!     common defence, promote the general Welfare, and secure the Blessings
      of Liberty to ourselves and our Posterity, do ordain and establish this
      Constitution for the United States of America.</para>
  </blockquote>]]></programlisting>
--- 978,990 ----
  <![ CDATA [<para>A small excerpt from the US Constitution;</para>
  	      
  <blockquote>
!   <title>Preamble to the Constitution of the United States</title>
  
    <attribution>Copied from a web site somewhere</attribution>
  	    
    <para>We the People of the United States, in Order to form a more perfect
      Union, establish Justice, insure domestic Tranquility, provide for the
!     common defense, promote the general Welfare, and secure the Blessings
      of Liberty to ourselves and our Posterity, do ordain and establish this
      Constitution for the United States of America.</para>
  </blockquote>]]></programlisting>
***************
*** 998,1004 ****
  	    
  	    <para>We the People of the United States, in Order to form a more
  	      perfect Union, establish Justice, insure domestic Tranquility,
! 	      provide for the common defence, promote the general Welfare, and
  	      secure the Blessings of Liberty to ourselves and our Posterity,
  	      do ordain and establish this Constitution for the United States
  	      of America.</para>
--- 998,1004 ----
  	    
  	    <para>We the People of the United States, in Order to form a more
  	      perfect Union, establish Justice, insure domestic Tranquility,
! 	      provide for the common defense, promote the general Welfare, and
  	      secure the Blessings of Liberty to ourselves and our Posterity,
  	      do ordain and establish this Constitution for the United States
  	      of America.</para>


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